my music!!!

hi all!
well today just 10 minutes ago, me and my friend recorded this song. It is not perfect, since it was our first go at recording music on computer, and it does have some mistakes (you'll hear my mom vacuum cleaning in the background and a lot of hiss as well...just ignore that would you?)... and since we recorded all that in one go..with no fancy touchups... so itsvery raw ...
would you guys listen to it and give your review??
we have tried to be really different...so it might sound awefully painful

https://rapidshare.de/files-en/565027/Untitled1.mp3.html

(fingers crossed )

accoustic guitars: james kinman
electric: ME

 

not working for me... :

says network error.....

 

its not opening man???

 

yeah i am working on it wait...

 

right...try this
https://rapidshare.de/files-en/565027/Untitled1.mp3.html

select "free"... let the page load....at the bottom of the next pageit will tell you how many seconds before the download will be available...so you'll haev to bear for a while.. the yahoo just messed up

 

yeah.. its nice... I liked... try to get a studio recording, eh??? Can bearly hear the rhythms initally... uz on the leads, I presume... and whose talking towarsd the end??

 

^^ hehe...yeah i know ...we recorded all that in one go so lots of mistakes..
glad you liked it..actually i was afraid no one will understand it cuz its really an off-beat kind of music...very different form what is generally made..
and at the end it was television...hehe..my dad was watching the news

 

hey it was cool... kinda different eh... nice m8

 

nice work
i was only paying attention to the leads, good feel

 

thnx @bandbaja .. it really helps to get a positive response from a pro
and glad you liked it...

 

arre bhai, i am not a pro
just a good listener
PRO is JAYSWAMI
in fact he will also say that he is not a pro
i dont think anyone here is a PRO MUSICIAN - ie earning a livelihood out of music

 

wah kya modesty hain

reps chahiye ??? :

 

uh-oh.. it says file doesnt exist.. alrdy dwnloaded 7 times...

 

^ no subhro you have to wait for some time before the downlaod becomes available to you... the time is mentioned at the bottom of the second page.

 

just listened to it. good lead sound. drone guitar keeps loops same 3 notes.. why is that? whats your recording set up?

 

^^hehe..recording setup?...a mic(cheap one) and my aging laptop thats all!! and i used cool edit pro 2.0 to mantain the background guitar loops ... james was messing it up a bit.,,,but i tried not to fiddle with it too much.

 

hey.. listnd 2 it. tht was niceeeee
reps :

 

sht... not agin ....

sprd some reps :

 

hey shahrukh..listened to ur mp3. Heres my honest feedback:
I thought the rhythm was psychedelic(which i liked )
Ur lead playing was good but I thought u were kinda restricted by the rhythm playing the same thing.
U need to do something about ur recording dude..im serious!
I could be completely wrong cuz im as high as everest right now
and finally wtf is Pleidiol Wyf I'm Gwlad??!!!!

 

hey that was nice,,,,,lead was good,,,,,,,
rock on,,,,,,,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,><><><><><><><>