after the birthday party, here s one for the crap club....it is my experience every month....some of u too i guess..i always forget to pay the mobile bill on time...the tune is JUDA HOKE BHI or AADAT song...lo ab aaye ho to zhelo is poem ko..: INTRO:: aaaaaaaaaaa aaaa aaaaa..ouch... (slow ) Due date hoke bhi, mobile bill bharna baaki hain, Itna sab rakhta hu yaad, Iski yaad nahi aati hain.: Due date hoke bhi............ SONG :: kaise jeeta hu main abhi, reliance ke calls se, faltu service hain inki, aadhe calls hote off pe. Month end par inka magar, Bill aata hain time pe,:dance: Ab to aadat si hain mujhe, Kabhi nahi bharta bill time pe. hey hey hey heye heye...hooo..hooo ye jo call rates hain, bahut mehenge hain, ghatado inhe, cutado inhe.:rock: aaaaaa..aaaa.....hoooo... Ab to aadat si hain mujhe, Kabhi nahi bharta bill time pe....: {{ gawd, i hope u din use ur brains for this....i had warned before..so im not responsible for ur brain malfunctions....: }}
dude, cant help...i l write crap poems..too many serious ones floatin aroud man...hehe..hafta bear with it re....haha....
No no, I'm not saying what you're writing is crappy (while I do not deny that I do not enjoy it). I'm just saying that you should try and be a bit versatile with your humour. I don't mean you should write "seriously" at all. I enjoy reading funny poems. I really do.
abhi my frnd u ve stood by ur image of a CRAPPER :beer: ... this one was awefully crappy: ..... perfect display of all th crap inside ur brain :shock: .... luvd it man ... u r becoming a trademark for all this crap dude .. keep it up .....
abhi bhai...aise hi likhte raho...aaj kal to crap hi bikta hai...and dont be surprised to see me in the line...
Ek baat add karna bhul gaya...crap padke bada fresh mahsush karta huin...kam se kam PJs se to badiyaa hai...lol
haan...tum logo ke liye hi likehtay main..jisko padhna hain padhega,warna bahut se acche poets hain yahan par.....
he he he...dare u stop writing these kinda poems Abhi.....I just lovee reading them....mai apne frnds ko bhi sunati hoon...yahan nite shft bohot boring ho jaati hai....to teri poem readke we laf...lol.