you may not see in me, what i see in you you may not feel , what i feel but my immortal love for you, theese mortal boundaries of world cant conceal however hard my love, i try to take you out of my mind, but yet again i find; reflection of my eternal love in your eyes, then my soul flies, and my heart cries , for your love. seeds of love in my heart you sow, cant be expressed in words i know. my love is like a flower in the wild; and a tide, in a ocean so wide; i hope through them you would sail; in the calm and in the gale, making my love a timeless tale.
w-0-w man, amazing one, the last stanza was really heart touching piece... well done pal.. keep up the good work
very good.... deepa i read it today.... then read it twice... read it thrice... its beautiful.... truly it touches heart.. it makes me remember.. draws me further to my past.. and guides me for future.... very nice poem... do keep riting...
hey deepak... a nice one.. amazing... heart touching.......reminds of my college days..... u know right...... Hey gives me "nasha" of 2 Quarters of OLD MONK.... Give some more nasha if u have...
@desipride...........thank u pal....... @slamdunk...........more nasha is on the way ...........wait............i shall be posting one more today.......
Hey deepak, I think U love somebody otherwise U couldn't have written a poem so touching.... It really touched me.... Keep it up...
@sanjay.......thanks pal..........u guessed it right man........but unfortunately she does not seem to understand..........
Oh it happens. Don't worry. If your love is true, she will be yours one day. And if she doesn't, she will lose a person like U, and for which she will realize one day. But I'll pray to the Almighty, so that she becomes yours..... Best of luck.....