long time i ve come up with original...couldnt think of ne title,so put it... LOST.......... lost in the darkness, im searchin for the light, the hand of power, that guides me forever. its been days, im going on and on, i don seem to get, the right path to move on. liitle is the scope, for me to get back, times gone by, lookin for the things i lack. its just for a walk, for me to go, looking for the light, even just the faintest glow.......
little ambiguous to comprehend but thats so coz possibly its state of mindish apparently a good effort!
nice....good effort.... but frankly abhi, u r better with your light and funny stuff rather than such dark stuff.... dosent suit u....
yeah man..i l do that..no time rite now amongst submissions and all..this one took hardly 1 minute..jus went on writin and then posted ...neways thx for reading.. @ vini, thank u...
i thought u r giving exams.. but u r writting poems instead... abhyaas kar re... but...yes..a good efforts..
^^^y dont u invest some more time....if in 1 min u came up with this ....by gving it sm more time u'll do wonders...
Yaar,im already doing wonders drawing sheets and writing assignments till 3 am..term end started re now with submissions and vivas and theory following...i l hardly be writin i guess re....il try if i get time.....
A pleasant change from the dreadful parodies. It's heartening to see you at least try. As for the poem, I didn't like it but that's okay. First of all, the idea wasn't good enough for me. It's okay for a verse or two but there just isn't enough content in your verse. I think you should merge the 4 verses into 1 or 2 and then expand upon your idea.
