MY :: Leaving on the 9.35......

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by abhimanjrekar, Mar 23, 2006.

  1. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    abhimanjrekar = Crappy stuffs..:p: ..i ve lived to it...

    this is related to our roz ka experience...many of u must be findin urself in this situation say leavin for college or office...i ve put the title as 9.35 coz in mumbai the 9.35 local train is the heart..it reaches the main town around 10.15. so all peeps try to get in it to avoid late marks in office..it comes our place at 9.35 hence the title...

    tune is of LEAVING ON A JET PLANE SONG....(( those u don know, hear cryptu recordin and then read this ))

    LEAVIN ON THE 9.35

    now my tiffins packed,
    im ready to go,
    its 9.30,
    but the stations close.

    i have to run,to catch the 9.35.

    wow! made it on time,
    it l be comin now,
    hell of a crowd today,
    im wondering how.

    no matter but,i have to leave on it now.

    its 9.35,i see it now,
    the platforms coming alive now,
    thers hell of chaos,
    to just get in it now.

    Coz im leavin on the 9.35,
    once it starts its just gonna fly,
    alighting everyone,as it passes by.

    Coz im leavin on the 9.35,
    once it starts its just gonna fly,
    alighting everyone,as it passes by.

    ive got in now,
    no spares sround,
    different smells around,
    i hear the fighting sounds.

    the show will start, and we r gonna be innn it,

    everyday it happens,
    this is nothing new,
    only characters change,
    but the peeps get screwed,

    i pray myself, yaar jus hold on.

    its been 20 mins im in the train,
    smells and fites seem to make me drain,
    this has to be borne with,
    if u r in the 9.35.

    Coz im leavin on the 9.35,
    once it starts its just gonna fly,
    alighting everyone,as it passes by.

    o yaar ,i have to go anyhow...

    Coz im leavin on the 9.35,
    once it starts its just gonna fly,
    alighting everyone,as it passes by.
    leavin on the 9.35,
    leavin on the 9.35.............:beer: :p:


    pSST PSST ;; ( .............................................nahi..don swear me...:p: )
     
  2. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    nice yaar i liked it -yeh thats a real old song - john denver naa...i liked it...havnt herd it fer a while......but real nice....u got a flair fer keepin it simple...post some more - and how bout turnin a cupl of these poems into a song??? :grin:
     
  3. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    yaar - :RollLol: toilet lagi hai kya...lol - just kiddin
     
  4. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    yaar..its chantal krent.....:dance: ..and i ve posted some songs like kutta na mila,etc...will do this if i get time..thx again..
     
  5. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    nice to read.
     
  6. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    how is it a poem, if its based on a song.
    its a plagiarised, parodied song, with all the "life" a philistine could possible put into it, to such an extent that it equates to spam, and is devoid of the basic ingredient of parody- humor, and it still manages to initiate a round of mutual masturbation.
    bravo
     
  7. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    mutual masturbation???
    :shock:
    hey dont bann me fer this - but - u masturbate on plagiarised, parodied songs???
    :shock: ​

    well = yeh in a wzy ur rite...but i still think its well dun...
     
  8. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    yes mutual masturbation, aka circle jerk look up what that means......


    yesss...i masturbate to parodies, they turn me on so much, i have a parody fetish...i love them oh so much....




















    yes that was sarcasm, in case you dint get that either
     
  9. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    oh come on - i kno wat that means - i was just being sarcastic as well...i like loud stuff...:eek:: and i aintthat dumb...anewez - lmao @ pacino...:grin:
     
  10. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    oki doc, i edited it...man u do murder my threads....heheheh.....kiddin....
     
  11. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    :eek::
    sorry dude - never did it on purpose...​
     
  12. arpi

    arpi New Member

    hmm Dr Saurabh's comments as well as the poem... DILCHASP bohot dilchasp :)

    -arpi
     
  13. shantanukr

    shantanukr yEh DiL mAanGe m0rE

    hahahahahahahh .. Mast hai

    :)
     
  14. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @ur poem..:RollLol: :RollLol:

    @discussion here:RollLol: :RollLol: :RollLol: :RollLol: :RollLol:
     
  15. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ** sighs **..thts not a poem./..hehe....
     
  16. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    dude....that was not funny

    seriously





    wtf is wrong with ur sense of humor?
     
  17. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    *decides not to comment anything fearing it might turn into a line of senseless shameful disgraced spam*
    :eek::​
     

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