My last...

As my memory fades
Of pain long gone
I smile at my luck
Like I was never forlorn

You've seen my soul bleed
And you've felt my pain
You got me through it all
My agony, slain

My laughter's real now
And so is my smile
I am finally the real me
Although I took a while

So this is what it feels like
This is what is 'bliss'
I feel it everytime
My forehead, you kiss

My last poem
This may be
But I won't miss all this
As now, finally, I'm free

 

SO simple but so sweet...:beer:
but honestly, i am not impressed with last lines of the last three paragraphs..just donn't seem to fit in the grammatical structure..

But I really liked the content that is expressed....very few words, but definitely speak a lot....and i can see the happiness in ur face too ..but i want more descriptive details..u knw what i mean..
Keep writing..this is ur talent..and never give this up..there's no better way to express ur emotions other than in a poem....:beer: ( i hope u didn't mean the part where u said this is my last poem: )

 

Ha! The man in your life deserves kudos if he inspired you to write this. Well done, but surely, you jest when you say this is your last? Do you not(please tell me not....)

 

yes,plz tell us its not your last...i just love ur poems...plz dont stop writing..

 

I know this poem isnt good, but it's just a way of telling you all that I may not write poems again...

I never saw my poetry writing as a talent, I needed to write then n I did.

I just don't need to, anymore. I'll find some other way to unleash my creativity!

Maybe i'll write again, when I feel like writing my own songs...

Thanks for all the appreciation you people showered upon me for all the poems I've posted on IGT.

 

So the IGT poetry forum leader job is open now? SCORE *rushes in application*

 

^Well, yeah. I think someone who's active in the poetry and lyrics forum should take over as the forum leader

 

Wow…just caught up…
Trish!! You leaving :shock: Why Giirlll????

Btw..awesome poem..like always. :grin:

 

^I'm not leaving

Just not gonna write poems anymore... that's all!

You all won't even notice

 

but ...but..why are u stopping it...any "specific reason"...:NoTalk: :NoNo: :cry1: :cry1: :cry1: :cry2: :cry2: I love ur poems a lot..don't stop writing soon..i will notice:

 

^hmm.. no.. dont think i can explain why... :

 

Donno if i should be happy or sad..
your good at poetry dear..
dont Stop writing..jus take up a different topic
even if you dont post it..do write poems..

Need not say i Like the poem..
especially...
"You've seen my soul bleed
And you've felt my pain
You got me through it all
My agony, slain"

"So this is what it feels like
This is what is 'bliss'
I feel it everytime
My forehead, you kiss"

.... for all the right reasons

God Bless u!..*hugs*

 

I was kidding there girl, and if that's your decision, god bless and so be it, i hope we can find someone half as good as you.

 

hey...y r u stoppin to write poems?......come on thts not rite.....reconsider it again...man i donn wanna miss ur poemss......nahiiiiiiiiii...do write Trish....all of us wan u to write yaar.....and regardin the above poem, as always i shouldnt be sayin anything........but plz ya write dear.....come on....

PSST :: if yar firm on ya decision, pm me ur poems then...but i donn wanna miss a single of urs.......nahii....*** thinkin of ways now to make u change ur mind ***

 

@martina.. thanks i dunno what else to say :

@disturbed.. i knew u were kidding, but it made me realize that'd be the best thing to do

@abhi.. i said i'm not gonna write, that doesnt mean i'm gonna write n not post. Thanks though

 

As i said, God bless, the search begins and it's not gonna be an easy one :

 

aree, waht's this y do u wanna go...
vaise to ye roog ****ataa nahi meri manoo to
Hum app ke hain hi kaun, phir bhi kahenge
saath to rahoo chahe kuch bhi-mat kahoo...

don't go ...(good poem simple and sweet)

 

I guess, on some level, I'm probably glad that you're quitting. I can't explain though.

 

Am so glad for you girl,
that the "dark angel" you no longer are.