My last...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Mar 4, 2006.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    As my memory fades
    Of pain long gone
    I smile at my luck
    Like I was never forlorn

    You've seen my soul bleed
    And you've felt my pain
    You got me through it all
    My agony, slain

    My laughter's real now
    And so is my smile
    I am finally the real me
    Although I took a while

    So this is what it feels like
    This is what is 'bliss'
    I feel it everytime
    My forehead, you kiss

    My last poem
    This may be
    But I won't miss all this
    As now, finally, I'm free
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  2. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    SO simple but so sweet...:beer:
    but honestly, i am not impressed with last lines of the last three paragraphs..just donn't seem to fit in the grammatical structure..

    But I really liked the content that is expressed....very few words, but definitely speak a lot....and i can see the happiness in ur face too;) ..but i want more descriptive details..u knw what i mean..:cool:
    Keep writing..this is ur talent..and never give this up..there's no better way to express ur emotions other than in a poem....:beer: ( i hope u didn't mean the part where u said this is my last poem:eek:: )
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Ha! The man in your life deserves kudos if he inspired you to write this. Well done, but surely, you jest when you say this is your last? Do you not(please tell me not....)
  4. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    yes,plz tell us its not your last...i just love ur poems...plz dont stop writing..
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    I know this poem isnt good, but it's just a way of telling you all that I may not write poems again...

    I never saw my poetry writing as a talent, I needed to write then n I did.

    I just don't need to, anymore. I'll find some other way to unleash my creativity!

    Maybe i'll write again, when I feel like writing my own songs...

    Thanks for all the appreciation you people showered upon me for all the poems I've posted on IGT.

  6. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    So the IGT poetry forum leader job is open now? SCORE *rushes in application*
  7. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^Well, yeah. I think someone who's active in the poetry and lyrics forum should take over as the forum leader :)
  8. Petunia

    Petunia terminally dorky

    Wow…just caught up…
    Trish!! You leaving :shock: Why Giirlll???? :confused:

    Btw..awesome always. :grin:
  9. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^I'm not leaving :)

    Just not gonna write poems anymore... that's all!

    You all won't even notice ;)
  10. Petunia

    Petunia terminally dorky

  11. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    but ...but..why are u stopping it...any "specific reason"...:NoTalk: :NoNo: :cry1: :cry1: :cry1: :cry2: :cry2: I love ur poems a lot..don't stop writing soon..i will notice:eek::
  12. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^hmm.. no.. dont think i can explain why... :eek::
  13. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Donno if i should be happy or sad..
    your good at poetry dear..
    dont Stop writing..jus take up a different topic;)
    even if you dont post write poems..

    Need not say i Like the poem..
    "You've seen my soul bleed
    And you've felt my pain
    You got me through it all
    My agony, slain"

    "So this is what it feels like
    This is what is 'bliss'
    I feel it everytime
    My forehead, you kiss"

    .... for all the right reasons:)

    God Bless u!..*hugs*
  14. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    I was kidding there girl, and if that's your decision, god bless and so be it, i hope we can find someone half as good as you.
  15. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    hey...y r u stoppin to write poems?......come on thts not rite.....reconsider it i donn wanna miss ur write Trish....all of us wan u to write yaar.....and regardin the above poem, as always i shouldnt be sayin anything........but plz ya write dear.....come on....

    PSST :: if yar firm on ya decision, pm me ur poems then...but i donn wanna miss a single of urs.......nahii....*** thinkin of ways now to make u change ur mind ***
  16. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    @martina.. thanks :) i dunno what else to say :eek::

    @disturbed.. i knew u were kidding, but it made me realize that'd be the best thing to do :)

    @abhi.. i said i'm not gonna write, that doesnt mean i'm gonna write n not post. Thanks though :)
  17. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    As i said, God bless, the search begins and it's not gonna be an easy one :p:
  18. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    aree, waht's this y do u wanna go...
    vaise to ye roog ****ataa nahi meri manoo to
    Hum app ke hain hi kaun, phir bhi kahenge
    saath to rahoo chahe kuch bhi-mat kahoo...

    don't go :(...(good poem simple and sweet)
  19. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    I guess, on some level, I'm probably glad that you're quitting. I can't explain though.
  20. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Am so glad for you girl,
    that the "dark angel" you no longer are.

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