my instrumental "i like hardcore" with beats (it will make u rock)

hi guys
this is my work and it took many days .but still its a demo with some mistakes



i hope that u guys will take a correct decision with it


listen it till the last

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandid=391965

 

Umm...interesting....i guess?

 

i didnt get a proper comment !

 

It didnt merit anymore than that. What were you doing? Was it a random jam or were you actually going anywhere with it?

 

what do think what was that?

 

hey guys its not that hard hardcore at least listen to it

 

seems a bit disconnected - rite now the tune is not goin anywhere - try practisin some scales - it wil give ur tune some meaning
also the drums/beats r just not workin - its like ur tryin to play 90's slow rock n ur drummer is playin 80's bollywood disco or sumthin

 

^lol, i actually got a headache listening to that. It was just so random and full of disorder.

 

lol guys i have written that i had some mistakes and it was a rough recording (can say randon) it was demo .i was checking my movement of scales
as far as drums are concerend it wasnt drummer who made this beat its a program
it was a drum loop

anyhow

criticism is the best policy i guess

 

I think Good Job by Mohsin
keep it up the good work mohsin
reps for ya from ur friend
Faiq