MY :: I had a date...........

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by abhimanjrekar, Apr 25, 2006.

  1. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<---- can me and crap stay away for long:p: ...kal ek bhaari viva aaj books main hi usi ka nateeja hai..

    I HAD A DATE...

    i had a date,
    as usual i was late,
    she was total red,
    "stuck in the traffic " i said.

    30 mins later,
    we wer in the movie theater,
    spiderman was on,
    he was more of a moron.

    the movie was pakau,
    but was liked by my dau,
    i wanted to eat chinese,
    but she insisted on pav bhaji with cheese.

    alas,it was time to depart,
    and i kissed my sweetheart,
    i dropped her by her gate,
    and kept lookin at my beautiful date......

    (( DAU bole to MAAL or simple word GIRLFRIEND ))

    ...i messed up in the last 2 lines..........:eek::
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  2. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    hmmmm....intresting man....nice - i liked it - sweet
    good to see that sumone writes poetry widout that "GOTH" element '
    the one abut the mumbai metro wuz cool too
  3. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ THX yaar..btw whts GOTH ??
  4. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    u kno yaar
    stuff like
    " and she cut me with her black saber
    leaving thy to protect my wounds
    cutting inch by inch
    hair by hair"
    pubicity rox!
    kno wat i mean/??? ;)
  5. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    :shock: :shock: wokay wokay...
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ye kyaa kuch adhura sa nahi hai
    main gaya vo aayi
    picture dekhi pav khaaii
    usske baad vo chali gayi
    beech ki baat kaha hai bhai ;)
  7. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ wo andar ki baat hain......
  8. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    lol...sweet n stupid!

  9. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ haha..ya..ul find those things in my poem...

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