My Heart This heartache of mine New in this shrine Neither its loss of love Nor loss of life But betraying a confidante. How to exress this pain for such an act of mine what under earth will i gain hurting your heart again. Saw in your eyes the hateful I put down my head remorseful I felt myself groggy Took over by pang, I groan. This is a heartful beseech from a seemingly callous creature forgive me for my behaviour for you are indulgent you'll let bygones be bygones Perceptive enough to bury the hatchet. Now please do tell me hows this one...obliged to hear from you all. _______________ Sharmontime
funny thing called a heart you got a smiley to this thread..that explains it all the words are wonderful its good to have you here.. Take care.. n God Bless..
yeah...but that smiley was though not intentional...jus wanted not make my post so remorseful...thanks a lot for your appreciation. i m indeed blessed. :dance: :dance:
hmm its nice sharmon..really gripping. I dont know, but near the end i wanted there to be more..i wsnt ready for the abrupt ending!! great going kid. keep it up.
thanks... n e ways....that was a good notice by you. however i'll try to add one more stanza before the last one...that shud do.. ( thougt abt it jus now though..shud verify if that'll live up to and keep the poems up to the mark...) as it is actually whn i wrote that i suppose that was what i wanted to tell him...i mailed him this poem the next moment. and btw you called me "kid"??? ... you not more than 4 months elder to me and u call me kid? : and everyone else out there...now tell hows this... wud love to listen more from you all... Sharmontime