Hi All, One more hatke attempt.. Don't take it as my story. I love to be in character's shoes.. Two years back in city bangalore, i was not single.. There was someone with whom i used to mingle.. Every other day used to bring me lot of joy.. Let me name her she was my girlfriend Sharmishtha Roy.. We used to talk alot on phone airtel bills still reflect.. life was so much beautiful with no regrets.. Always on dreams always lost on her thoughts.. I was like a prisoner standing in her heart's court.. It was raining heavily when I decided to meet her I was having fever still i decided to greet her.. they say u shud never forget ur gf's birthday.. so i reached her home even though I was ahead one day.. One flash of light just passed by my eyes... Few momories popped up and tore me apart like an ice.. There was darkness all arround and me shouting for light.. veins were bleeding senses lost and neck choking tight.. They say don't trust someone when you can't resist.. but is that the clause you need to sign till your love persists.. But still I love those good old days and moments i cherished.. I am single again what if that night my morals my trust my love perished.. Please comment.. I m a learner in the school of poetry.. Regards ~Bish.
^ where in the whole poem is ur girlfriend's (new) boyfriend ??? sarmishtaha roy ... umm ... bong ??? :think: where r u from ???
Neo Sir, there is a search engine called google.com if you doubt the originality and authenticity of poem you can use it. Vishwa till now has never copy pasted any poem nor he will ever do... I always right what comes in my heart.. and what makes me think and imagine.. creativity is not anyone's property.. any person can be blessed with it.. by this time you should have understood this.. and if you have not then i m sorry to say you still don't know vishwa.. whole IGT has read my poems whether its hindi or english.. funny or erotic.. it all comes from my brain and heart.. and it hurts when someone like you whom i admire makes such comments on my creativity.. if u still doubt it.. read all poems written by vishwa_81us or ~Bish.. you can smell creativity.. pardon me if i spoke much..
Dude , a very emotional attempt but didnt click. You went slow and put details in the beginning but ended abruptly.
"MY" girlfriend's BOYFRIEND. Apparently, i have the poem of the same name. But its a little different. HEre it goes: quick was my question quick was her reply thats why i couldnt tell if it was the truth or a lie never i thought she would do this to me i gave her everything from A to Zee Every time i caught her she'd handle it well and for not trusting her she'd give me hell after a few years i somehow realized that there was something that never met my eyes there were a few mails that she used to send that's how i found out about her boyfriend i Never had a clue until the end about my girlfriend's BOYFRIEND.