My Girlfriend's Boyfriend

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by ~Bish, May 6, 2007.

  1. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    Hi All,

    One more hatke attempt.. Don't take it as my story. I love to be in character's shoes..

    Two years back in city bangalore, i was not single..
    There was someone with whom i used to mingle..
    Every other day used to bring me lot of joy..
    Let me name her she was my girlfriend Sharmishtha Roy..

    We used to talk alot on phone airtel bills still reflect..
    life was so much beautiful with no regrets..
    Always on dreams always lost on her thoughts..
    I was like a prisoner standing in her heart's court..

    It was raining heavily when I decided to meet her
    I was having fever still i decided to greet her..
    they say u shud never forget ur gf's birthday..
    so i reached her home even though I was ahead one day..

    One flash of light just passed by my eyes...
    Few momories popped up and tore me apart like an ice..
    There was darkness all arround and me shouting for light..
    veins were bleeding senses lost and neck choking tight..

    They say don't trust someone when you can't resist..
    but is that the clause you need to sign till your love persists..
    But still I love those good old days and moments i cherished..
    I am single again what if that night my morals my trust my love perished..

    Please comment.. I m a learner in the school of poetry..

  2. paranoid13rohan

    paranoid13rohan .: iNDiaN iDioT 3.0 :.

    ^ where in the whole poem is ur girlfriend's (new) boyfriend ???

    sarmishtaha roy ... umm ... bong ??? :think:

    where r u from ???
  3. subheet

    subheet Member

    well ..a gud poem but i didnt get the 4th stanza....!!!!!!!!
  4. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    Gud one vishwa!!!Typical style of urs:p:
  5. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    Confusing! Are these yours or are you copy pasting?
  6. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    Neo Sir, there is a search engine called if you doubt the originality and authenticity of poem you can use it. Vishwa till now has never copy pasted any poem nor he will ever do... I always right what comes in my heart.. and what makes me think and imagine.. creativity is not anyone's property.. any person can be blessed with it.. by this time you should have understood this.. and if you have not then i m sorry to say you still don't know vishwa.. whole IGT has read my poems whether its hindi or english.. funny or erotic.. it all comes from my brain and heart.. and it hurts when someone like you whom i admire makes such comments on my creativity.. if u still doubt it.. read all poems written by vishwa_81us or ~Bish.. you can smell creativity..

    pardon me if i spoke much..
  7. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    wow...mujhe bhi senti kar diya:cry1:
  8. yazi

    yazi Banned

    Reminds me of Rajnikant

    BTW, nice poem
  9. zicky5608

    zicky5608 Power Shortage

    Nice one :)

    Kya bhai aap bhadak gaye...itni acchi poem likho toh neo ko toh shak hoga hi na. ;)
  10. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Ridiculous really.
  11. rocker_vish

    rocker_vish New Member

    nice..!!! [:D]
  12. god_of_guitar

    god_of_guitar New Member

    great poem.. ur a good lyricist
  13. NFR

    NFR Nightfire... X Treme

    WERE U by ne chance inspired by Adnan Sami's TERI YAAD AATI HAI...?
  14. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    thanx alot guyz.. ur replies mean a lot for me..
  15. Krazy 4 Guitar

    Krazy 4 Guitar Rockstar

    Dude , a very emotional attempt but didnt click.
    You went slow and put details in the beginning but ended abruptly.
  16. ak&guitar

    ak&guitar THE INNER VOICE

    "MY" girlfriend's BOYFRIEND.

    Apparently, i have the poem of the same name. But its a little different.

    HEre it goes:

    quick was my question
    quick was her reply
    thats why i couldnt tell
    if it was the truth or a lie

    never i thought
    she would do this to me
    i gave her everything
    from A to Zee

    Every time i caught her
    she'd handle it well
    and for not trusting her
    she'd give me hell

    after a few years
    i somehow realized
    that there was something
    that never met my eyes

    there were a few mails
    that she used to send
    that's how i found out
    about her boyfriend

    i Never had a clue
    until the end
    about my girlfriend's

  17. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    ^I'm guessing this happened pretty recently?
    The's good for you..therapeutic.

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