My first song

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Ali Akber, Dec 21, 2005.

  1. Ali Akber

    Ali Akber New Member

    Hi ppl.
    This is my first post.
    plzz see and reply how my song is.
    Any modifications or changes r welcome



    aise zinda hoon mein abhi
    jaise khaab adhorey heyyyyy….
    teri yadoon mein ghum hoon mein abhi
    meri zindagi adhoori hai

    yaad teri jab bhi aye gi
    hud say mein guzar ja-oo ga
    koi muskelay na phir ho gi
    agar khaabon mein tum ao gayyyyyyyyy

    yaad jab bhi tum aajaogay
    ansoon ankhoon mein aa jaye-n-gayyyy
    ab to aise zinda hoon mein abhi sirf jeenay ke lee-ay
    hey hey hayayayayayayay oooooo
    owoooooooooooooooo…aaaaaaaaaaaaaa—aaa…aaaaaaaaaaaaaa
     
  2. Ali Akber

    Ali Akber New Member

    come on ppl...12 views and no reply???
     
  3. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    nice rip of bikhra hoon main....with some editing...
     
  4. moonshadow

    moonshadow New Member

    hey akber dat was a decent first song.
     
  5. Ali Akber

    Ali Akber New Member

    thnx alot moon shadow :)
     

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