Hi ppl. This is my first post. plzz see and reply how my song is. Any modifications or changes r welcome aise zinda hoon mein abhi jaise khaab adhorey heyyyyy…. teri yadoon mein ghum hoon mein abhi meri zindagi adhoori hai yaad teri jab bhi aye gi hud say mein guzar ja-oo ga koi muskelay na phir ho gi agar khaabon mein tum ao gayyyyyyyyy yaad jab bhi tum aajaogay ansoon ankhoon mein aa jaye-n-gayyyy ab to aise zinda hoon mein abhi sirf jeenay ke lee-ay hey hey hayayayayayayay oooooo owoooooooooooooooo…aaaaaaaaaaaaaa—aaa…aaaaaaaaaaaaaa