My First Song Post....Critque

Ok this is a song of mine....a kinda rough draft.....opinions.......no lyrics...tho in the pipe line.....Critique it...but go easy on me :
audio is choppy in places

https://rapidshare.de/files/5952915/mine.ogg.html

 

Sounds niceeeeeeeeeeeee,....... reps for u!! :rock:

 

well can i give it a shot on the vocals???

 

despite so many people being on broadband you wud think there would be more downloads....

 

i heard it man..

im not gonna comment on the audio..

it was actually decent enough i guess..it needs vocals..
or better yet..u could have played the vocal melody on the guitar out here.
there were a few timing errors..but its ok..as this is just a rough draft..
keep postin man..
would like to hear the finished work.
this place needs some life.

 

Being the kinda guitarist i am, i cant judge someones work
but dear your good..Do add some lyrics to this

 

thats it.........
i want more feedback u lazy assses
remember this is a mod ur dealing with * kidding *
cmon .....gimme feedback

 

oh hell..i was about to download it BUT whats the extension name .ogg all about?? :think: i've windows media player only..do lemme know if i can.. or is that u've uploaded as zipped...m confused! :

lemme know

 

winamp plays .ogg files

 

tht was a kewl recording doc....just try adding sm lyrics to it....

 

Great job yaar.... btw, which song is this ? :-S