my first song "jal jal ke dhuan" plz plz plzzzz reply!!!

a biiggg hii to all guyss !
guys as u all know im a new beginner here and im posting my first song "jal jal ke dhuan" from ek khiladi ek hasina movie! plz plz tell me that how is that song???:

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im desperately waiting for ur replys......:nw::nw::nw:

 

what r the chords u used???

not bad at all ........... just u could have improved the raat ko hosh hain zaroorat yaha part ie get it smooth with the voice
n u messed a little bit in the first part ending ie the nananaaa part(the one on the 3 min one )...

reps

 

thanx buddy spy_game i really appreciate u! i know dat i slipped at some places but i tried to come over that! by da way thanx to u again! here r da chords of the song......:dance:

jal(Am) jal ke dhuan (F)ho rahe hum

nas(Am) nas mein nasha, (F)bheega hai man

ji(G)smo ki dabi a(F)arzoo hai

m(E)ar jayeinn teri baaho(Am) mein hum.....

ho(Am)oooooooooo(F)hooooooh(G)ooohooooo(F)hooooooooo

a(Am)aj raat k(F)o hosh ki (C)hai zarurat ka(Am)haan

a(Am)aj sharm (F)se koi keh(C)de naa aaye ya(Am)haan

ch(Am)une se tere ho ja(F)aye man

hota(Am) hai shuru deewaa(F)napan

na(G)shaaaaa....

jal jal ke dhuan..... and the whole song goes like that, thanx again



buh byeee:beer:

 

very nice dude, good guitaring, very controlled voice(i think) goes well with the song, even though iv nt heard this song, its made me want to go find it. again nice work!

 

oh thanx eva! ^

 

yaar 23 views or sirf 2 replys!!!!!!
kuch to kaho yaar!! gaali ho dedo!!

 

smartsashank, good voice! nice guitar too especially since u said u r beginner. is it some movie song? can u give some more info? well done bro. improve everytime with feedback suggestions. good idea to post chords. rgds

 

Bahut sahi bahut sahi laage raho..........dude can u post the starting tabs...intro part.............

 

@ jozko,this song is from "ek khiladi ek hasina" movie jal jal ke dhuan! u can find this song @ cooltoad.com
@ always_guitar, intro part is easy just hold Am chord and

el---------------------------------------------------------------------l
bl----1--0--1---------1--0--1-1/3/1------0---0-----0---0-0/1/0-----l
gl---------------------------------------------2---------2-------------l
dl-2---------------2-------------------2----------2----------------l

 

hey nice one dude.... like the flow of your voice.... chords should be played in the background.. its overlapping your voice... next time keep that in mind..
reps :beer:

 

Cool!

Nice work man...next time try to keep the vocals on the front...atleast to the point where the can be heard

keep up the good work!

 

thanks sashank, rgds

 

Hi Sashank, after reading so many good comments I am eager to listen to your recording...since I can't do that in office can you provide the download link for Jal Jal ke ....song?

Thanks

 

hey thanx buddy, for listening my song......
now u can download the song from same place..

thanx again..
buh byeeeeee
have a nice day!