My First Recording (Zara sa and Gazab ka hai din) ..

Dear All,

I finally manage to gather some courage to record and put my first recording online, can you please listen to it and give me your feedback.

I am learning guitar for last 2 months .. so really have a long way to go

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=861709


Regards
Jayesh Jain

 

Well so you too have started late like me man ! Now all depends on ur practice both in guitar and vocals. I think vocals will take time to improve. But as its ur first song on guitar you are on the right path. Just try to practice some steady notes more. Strumming was simple. ultimately all that matters is how it all works out.
Keep up the work. Will b waiting for more.

 

for two months its ok.......but not the best you can do......try strumming properly.....more fluent strokes required..............

some of the chords were changed too early.....try working on that....

nice voice.......


cheers!
:beer:

 

Thank You

Thank you for your feedback. I am working on my strummming, for some reason it is very difficult (more than i thought) but as you said it is all about practice

Regards
Jayesh Jain

 

Thank you

Hi Parry,

I just went and heard some of the songs you have recorded (sorry I dont understand punjabi much) but you have an excellent voice, can I please ask you how do you record your songs (it is so clear and crisp) I am using my computer and a cheap computer microphone

Regards
Jayesh Jain

 

Well thanks Jayesh. I dont use and other gadget. I too use the ordinary microphone. I place it on my neck and then record the songs. Nothing extraordinary thing to do. :grin:
And yes my recorded sound is better than my original vocal chords.
Other people use audacity software which u can download free from the net. But that is only for creating some special effects. But then one can not know ones's faults to improve upon.
But man u r going good. Just dont stop the practice and u wil learn in months wat others take yrs to learn.

 

Its what the majority already said, there is alot of room for improvement. But man don't worry you started yet, 2 months is just nothing in the musicworld!
Try to sing with more passion, i mean add some more feelings in your voice, the Sur has to be improved aswell, there are some Sur faults here and there!

Overall is this done pretty well, for sure for someone who started 2 months ago, keep going man and take care!!!

 

good start

hi jayesh,
its good to listen to ur recording.

just adding one more point to wht others said;
looks like ur voice is trying to follow ur strumming very much and is not free of ur guitar playing, i hope u understand wht i mean to say.
i know its pretty much difficult to manage both singing and playing guitar at the same time, but do conceterate on this point, otherwise the song will loose its tempo and feels singing also as strumming.

keep going
- Vikas DK

 

Thank you

I think this was the best feedback i ever got, I have to stop thinking about strumming when I sing, I wish I was a female (at least I could multitask)

Regards
Jayesh Jain