my first post & first recording-plz rply

hi igtians ,
dis is my 1st post so i desperately want ur rply

u can listen 2 my rec at-
https://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5013795&q=hi

YAKEEN
strumming pattern: D DUD DUD

e----2-----2---------0---0-----------------|
B------3-----3--------3---3----------------|
G--2-----0-----0---2---0---3---------------| x4 Guitar 1
D-0--------------0-------------------------|
A------------------------------------------|
E------------------------------------------|


e--------------------------------------|
B--------------------------------------|
G-12-11--7-9----12-11-12-14------------| Piano Part
D--------------------------------------|
A--------------------------------------|
E--------------------------------------|




D
aaj dil
G
dukha hai
A
tum
D
yaad aye
D
anjaney
G
log hain
A
apney kahan
D
dhoond paye

D
jagey hain
G
soey nahi
A
aisi hai meri
D
yeh bai chaini
D
din bhi wohi
G
ratein wohi
A
sansoon mein sasey
D
hain nahi
D G A D
hmm..........

SOlo
G-9-11--9-11-12-14---------------------|
D-0---------------12~-12-11-7-9-77-----|

B----10----8----7---7------------------|
G--7---7--7-7--7-7---7-----------------|
D-0-----0----0----0--------------------|

B----10----8----7---7---7--------------|
G--7---7--7-7--7-7---7----7------------|
D-0-----0----0----0----0---------------|

B-8-8---12-10-15-15--------------------|
G-7-7----------------------------------|
D-0-0----------------------------------|

D G
shamain abb dhalte nahe
A D
aanchal jo tera simat jayee
D G
aap yahan hamesha rahain
A D
duri rahay na hoon faaslay

D G A D
hmm........ X 2

SOLO
e----------------------------------------------------------------|
B-7/9---9---7---5---7---5---7---9/10---9---7---5---7/9---7-------|
G---------------------------------------------------------------5~---|

e------------------7---6----11/12---12---11---9---7-------------|
B7/9---9---7---5--------------------------------------5---------|
D G
jagay hain soyee nahe
A D
aiseehai meree yeh baychanee
D G
din bhee wohi raatien wohi
A D
saansoun main saansain hain nahee


D G A D
hmm hmmm.... x 2

D G
abb agar tum mile to
A D
itna yaqeen hai
D G
hans dayen gay humto
A D
roona nahe hai

 

plz plz plz rply igtians
i m waiting

 

23 views & no rply
rply IGTians plz

 

Post the link.

 

https://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5013795&q=hi

 

You really are screwed. wtf was that?

 

i know i m not gud at singing & guitaring
but dat was my 1st try

plz suggest some ways 2 improove

 

No i mean the recording was of 20 odd seconds.Where is the rest?

 

i think u r mistaken smwhre
i ve listened again
it is full recording
plz again try d link
https://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=664199&songID=5013795

 

nice try

well done .
need to tune a bit but good first attempt .

 

thanx soulmate

 

thanx soulmate for d rply

 

i heard both the sngs aadat and yakeen...and i wanna tell u some thing...on which u can work upon
1]work on ur vocals....u gotta WORK verrrry HARD
2]i guess its fine when u use echo for vocals while recording...but plzzz do NOT use echo for the guitar...it sounds very baddd....it doesnt display of hww good u are at guitaring
3] record vocals and guitar separately....this could be one of the reasons why ur nt giving ur 100% in both guitaring and singing

DON TAKE IT IN A RONG WAY DUDE PLZZZZ....I WANTED TO SAY THIS SO THT ATLEAST U CAN KNWW OF WHERE U ARE GOING RONG ...HOPE FULLY UR NEXT RECORDING WILL BE THE BEST ON igt B-)

 

thanx raviction
i'l surely work on d things u told me n make sure my next rec 2 b a gud one

 

you really screwed up the song man,,,,,,,,,,good attempt but no sync bet'n ur vocals and guitar,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,try to improve that