I write alot of poetry (https://smitzonian.googlepages.com/)... and now that i am learning the guitar someday i will write tunes for all my poems...and sing them my first poem for this forum .. if anyone is interested in co-composing pm me .. I am still Alive. A bond we share is so strong, with death it cannot die I am not breathing anymore, but I am still alive You cannot hear me , I am not visible to your eyes As long as I am in your heart I am still alive You are sad , and unhappy and I know you will cry But if you smile again , you will know I am still alive I may not be a part of your daily life But if I am in your thoughts , I am still alive When you look at the sea , you will find me in every tide When you go for a walk , you will find me walking side by side Whenever you wish to meet me, look up into the sky I am in every cloud, every star, in every bird that can fly In this world, you shall always realize, That no matter what “I am still alive” smitzonian
Reminded me of "Alive" by Pearl Jam. Hey Smitzonian...honestly i think you need to spend some more time on your composition, luks like you have been rhyming words just for sake of it.Try free prose. but nice for first attempt..atleast on IGT. Njoy!!
Rhyming lines adds a rhythm to my thoughts ... so me rhyming for the sake of rhyming is probably an incorrect remark. Thats just the way i prefer writing... i am glad the rest liked it .. will keep posting more.. Cheers Smitzonian
