My first original composition - FIRST LOVE - VAYU

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by god of guitar85, Oct 23, 2007.

  1. god of guitar85

    god of guitar85 GUITARPLAYER

    guyz this is my first original composition.i hve written the lyrics,composed the song,sang and also played guitar. the song is titled First Love.plzzzz listen to it and ur feedbacks vil be appreciated!!!!

    here's da link -

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=532902

    Lyrics of my song-

    FIRST LOVE - VAYU

    I know i was a fool
    to fall in love with you
    And now i can't forget you
    coz my heart just thinks about you
    Am i da one 2 be blamed
    When you are so beautiful as ur name..!!

    I saw you in my class
    the girl with the long hair
    You smiled at me right there
    I gave you my heart there

    We went out on a date
    I was sorry for being late
    We talked with our eyes
    and i dreamt of u all day
    Am i da one 2 be blamed
    When you are so beautiful as ur name..!!

    I said I loved you
    and you said that u do too
    We were happy together
    For now and forever

    But it didn't last much
    It was over before i knew
    And now I'm singing this song 4 u.........!!!!
     
  2. VIN91

    VIN91 New Member

    gr8 little composition
    aptly titled god of guitar
    i lyked man who sold the world too
     
  3. krishnaG

    krishnaG New Member

    hey GOG, its cool man...nice soft song...good guitaring...and the leads was good too!
    may be u wud want to put the lyrics in the tread as well...so ppl can relate to it...while listening to the song....
     
  4. max_payne16

    max_payne16 New Member

    Lyrics of my song-

    FIRST LOVE - VAYU

    I know i was a fool
    to fall in love with you
    And now i can't forget you
    coz my heart just thinks about you
    Am i da one 2 be blamed
    When you are so beautiful as ur name..!!

    I saw you in my class
    the girl with the long hair
    You smiled at me right there
    I gave you my heart there

    We went out on a date
    I was sorry for being late
    We talked with our eyes
    and i dreamt of u all day
    Am i da one 2 be blamed
    When you are so beautiful as ur name..!!

    I said I loved you
    and you said that u do too
    We were happy together
    For now and forever

    But it didn't last much
    It was over before i knew
    And now I'm singing this song 4 u.........!!!!
     
  5. max_payne16

    max_payne16 New Member

    Duuude....U rock!!
     
  6. god of guitar85

    god of guitar85 GUITARPLAYER

    @vin91 - thxs dude!!!

    @krishnaG - thxs man 4 ur comments.u r rite man, with lyrics ppl vil be able to relate to da song more!!

    @max_payne16 - thxs dude for putting those lyrics 4 me!!!!!

    Rock on!!!!!
     
  7. anshammer

    anshammer MR. - 2 - MINZ

    wowwwww.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.. :)
     
  8. god_of_guitar

    god_of_guitar New Member

    simply amazing... what a song...
     
  9. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    Very well done man, you can be proud of yourself cause you did a good job.
    A few things would make your composition complete as it would become a real song, try adding some drums, add a bassline and maybe some chords(pads, strings) in the background. The whole song would sound much better, please don't understand me wrong, i'm not tryinng to tell you what to do, these are just my suggestions.
    And ofcourse, you have to improve the vocals cause its not sung very well (the Sur can be improved and most important, try singing with more feeling, passion etc.) , i heard alot of your songs and i think you are capable to do much better.
    Overall, as i said, very well done, keep it up man!!!
    Heard your other song too man, Labon ko - BHOOL BHULAIYA, its done very well too, take care man!!!
     
  10. lohit

    lohit New Member

    Hey!!

    Cant find the song ... plzz send the link again ... well rest all ur covers r suprb ... great guitaring n very nice voice too .....
     
  11. god of guitar85

    god of guitar85 GUITARPLAYER

    thxs a lot every1 for ur comments!!!! well, i hve re-recorded the song again. so do check it out!!!!!
     
  12. lohit

    lohit New Member

    Wow

    Master piece man ....................... very nice .................... superb ..........
     
  13. god of guitar85

    god of guitar85 GUITARPLAYER

    hey thxs lohit 4 listening my song and 4 ur comments!!!!
     

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