My First Love...v0.1

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by mr_bean, Dec 30, 2004.

  1. mr_bean

    mr_bean New Member

    Early were my steps to the daunting Manhood,
    Dreaming all day, and wondering through the woods.
    Wanting, but afraid to explore the man within,
    Asking myself, "Am I dreaming?".

    Early in the season when flowers bloom,
    The air was sweet in the mother's room;
    Morning came with the promise of success,
    Like everyday I jumped into my dress.

    Eager in heart to meet friends,
    To share the thoughts and learn new trends;
    But it all differed that day,
    As I passed the Golden Bay.

    At a distance from where i was,
    Winter snow I felt it was.
    Emerged a lady whom I had seen,
    But where! "Was it in my dream?".

    It was when she came close,
    I thought my heart needed some dose.
    I was cold and still like a log,
    Not even attending the bark of a dog.

    Back to life with a look at her eyes,
    which seemed to wake anything which dies.
    A question rose disturbing my mind,
    "Is she who I thought was my kind?".

    Waiting for friends to ask a way,
    But three were we near Golden Bay.
    Never did I dare to ask her,
    Neither the dog with a common fur.

    Human built a machine came,
    Took her away; With me leaving anger and fame.
    For sometime I was around the globe,
    But then asking,"Was this my First Love?".

    Sukanta Kr Swain
    Computer Science Student
    Assam University,Silchar.
  2. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    I told U earlier that U should be a student of English rather than Comp. Sc.
    Go there U will be the BEST.
    Need 2 learn poetry from U.
  3. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    my confession

    Hi.. let me know if u liked my poem..
    its vry artistic just as urs :)

    it goes like this...

    ...My Confession...

    OK THAT'S A LIE :p:


    chill :beer: Subhro.
  4. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Well, that's a superhit. Keep going.
  5. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    thnx dude.. :p: @ sanjay
    wil xpress my talent in the future too. :rock:

  6. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    I'll be posting my poem soon.....
    Learning from U and Mr_bean.
  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice Poem:)
  8. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    nice one bean.. .nice work
  9. mr_bean

    mr_bean New Member

    I don't know whether i can write good poems or not but thanks all u friends for all ur responses, once again THANKS.
  10. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    whos the lady , mr beans ??
  11. mr_bean

    mr_bean New Member

    I'm too waiting for the lady to come in my life Bob.
  12. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    ha ha , nice one !! i am sure you would get her soon and also your poetry will change a lil ....
  13. Asmodeus

    Asmodeus New Member

    Dude.. seriousl, nice onE...!

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