Drenched in blood But free from sympathy Cold and alone But no more lonely You speak to my heart Without saying a word I embrace you, my dark angel My thoughts, no more blurred I'm not scared now Of being trapped in a dead fall As you envelope me Without fear I stand tall I'm numb but still alive My only comfort being you You may call me morbid But there's nothing I can do Still hurt I may be But too stupefied to know Not weathering away anymore As long as you don't go P.S. I may add more later...
that explains ur title : kinda nice one...one of ur best works...liked it coz im in a sad mood today....i kinda dont encourage or enjoy dark stuff nowdays.....everyone seems to be into that.... anyway...u write well...keep it up
@the_wizard thnx.. i aint writin dark stuff coz every1's in2 it or smthng... jst felt like it, dats all @ansh thnx
i didnt mean tht...i just said I dont enjoy them much coz everyone sems to be writing them... and sm crappy newspaper says Indian youth are one of the happiest in the world peace
no probs ... i was just kidding ... now that u feel that am scared ... u will grow lax ... and then i will make my move ... (oops i spilled the beans)
donno how i missed this one.. its a wonderful poem.. every single line is expressive and overflowing with emotions........................and i'm speechless!! thou art a good angel tk care