My Dark Angel

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Oct 17, 2005.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Drenched in blood
    But free from sympathy
    Cold and alone
    But no more lonely

    You speak to my heart
    Without saying a word
    I embrace you, my dark angel
    My thoughts, no more blurred

    I'm not scared now
    Of being trapped in a dead fall
    As you envelope me
    Without fear I stand tall

    I'm numb but still alive
    My only comfort being you
    You may call me morbid
    But there's nothing I can do

    Still hurt I may be
    But too stupefied to know
    Not weathering away anymore
    As long as you don't go

    P.S. I may add more later...
  2. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    that explains ur title :p:

    kinda nice of ur best works...liked it coz im in a sad mood today....i kinda dont encourage or enjoy dark stuff nowdays.....everyone seems to be into that....

    anyway...u write well...keep it up
  3. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    well written..
    nicely expressed..
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    thnx.. i aint writin dark stuff coz every1's in2 it or smthng... jst felt like it, dats all


  5. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    i didnt mean tht...i just said I dont enjoy them much coz everyone sems to be writing them...

    and sm crappy newspaper says Indian youth are one of the happiest in the world

    peace :cool:
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^ahan.. ok, got it
  7. bobbit_uncut

    bobbit_uncut Banned


    nice dark and gloomy one
  8. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    am scared of you now ...

  9. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    thnx man...
  10. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    LMAO :RollLol:


  11. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    no probs ...
    i was just kidding ...

    now that u feel that am scared ... u will grow lax ... and then i will make my move ...

    (oops i spilled the beans)
  12. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^^doesnt matter... i'm kinda dumb. i didnt get wat u meant at all ;)
  13. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    ok ... good for me ...
    dont tell me i didnt warn ya :p:
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Phew....a nice one...yet again
  15. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    thnx babe :)
  16. #iR@


    @ angel....... VERY NICE!!!! really like it..... :beer:
  17. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    thnx.. :)
  18. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    donno how i missed this one..
    its a wonderful poem..
    every single line is expressive and overflowing with emotions........................and i'm speechless!!

    thou art a good angel ;)
    tk care
  19. dennis

    dennis The Bhangra King

    ahh..tht was amazing! very cool
  20. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    :) i noticed the change in my title... ;)




    so u finally read one of my poems!

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