here's my second one of my own.... THE CITADEL Wen the wind was dull, And the sky was low, In my life,there was no flow. It felt like, FATE had given me a huge blow. Amidst the clouds of darkness, There came the rays of hope, I knew i had to win, Even wen there was no scope. Frustration seemed to come in, Like an uninvited guest, Success was like a stranger, Who had been put to rest. But it was the belief within, Tht seemed to tell, Hey why r u livin, Like a citadel tht fell. I knew i was a soldier, Who was wounded in the war, But i had to rise up, To conquer this war, Now i m all fine, And risen on my feet, Im all rarin to go, To face life's scorchin heat, No matter how things become worse, Now i wont care, I'll surely rebuild the citadel, And this time, Without any wear and tear....
aree these were writtens some 2 yrs back...i had been goin through a very very bad phase..tabhi ka..u can see it in the emotions in poem..newayz thx all..will try writin more...