My :: Birds

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by abhimanjrekar, Oct 27, 2005.

  1. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    this is my own and 3rd..wrote today ..


    Birds flyin in the blue sky,
    Looks soarin seein the clouds so high,
    No wonder the air gives them hope,
    To expand their wings to a larger scope.

    Amidst the pretty things they fly,
    Reachin to all those tht lie,
    Look in their eyes u see no fear,
    They l alwayz be ther wen u want them near.

    Unstoppin and uncaring,
    They move on with their plight,
    Undazed by whts in their sight,
    Helpin tho spread the rayz of light. :beer:

    {{ i hope u understan this,coz i myself didnt...wrote it at 11 pm,half asleep :dance: :p: }}
  2. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    :RollLol: ..this sounds more or less like my erly days poems!
  3. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    I can make out

    You are fed up being a human ... n now u wanna be a bird :grin:
  4. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    ^^ :RollLol:
  5. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    tht was nice stuff....kiddish but u write better than wat i do :)
  6. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    yarr imagine writin poem at 11 inspired by a kabutar tht came on the window............
  7. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    see i told ya :p:
  8. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    na im fine being a human..heheh.. :p:
  9. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    i mostly write at night... 11 isnt late at all.
  10. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    aree for me ,in exam times its vivas r goin i sleep early..

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