My Best Thing

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by coolgirl_babe, Jun 1, 2005.

  1. coolgirl_babe

    coolgirl_babe ~STOP TRYING TO BE ME~

    I once met a guy
    Tall, fine, and handsome
    Who brought sunshine
    Into my life
    Made the dark clouds go away
    Brought joy to the wounded heart
    Made me smile and my spirit sing
    He was my best thing
    Romantic walks in the park
    But there were cold stares
    Following in the dark
    He showered me with gifts
    Swirling me around in his arms
    Having his soft lips cover mine
    But then it was all gone
    Subhro likes this.
  2. coolgirl_hotty

    coolgirl_hotty New Member

    Good job coolgirl_babe. I liked it very much. I think u r a good poet. We both have something in common, our ID names have the same first name.
  3. Seelan

    Seelan Soldier Of Fortune

    the poem is nice but that line " Tall, fine, and handsome " was the screwed up part .. (thats my opinion so pls no fighting :p ) .... c'mon ppz , good looking is something god gave , there is nothing to be proud of .. its juz a gift .. its the character that god didn't give u but something you built up ..... love is juz so full of crap ... i spent my whole life thinkin of 1 and it jus screwed up ... bleah .. ok this is off topic .. but nice poem ..

  4. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    Nice poem. Like seelan said, the man shouldn't be tall, fine or hansome to bring sunshine into ur life. He just needs a gud heart.
  5. coolgirl_babe

    coolgirl_babe ~STOP TRYING TO BE ME~

    Well, that is true. But guy also needs to be tall, fine, and handsome. I am tall I need a guy who is tall as well. The guy should not be smoking or even taking drugs - fine. Handsome is no big deal.
  6. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    that's important thing he shuldn't be smoking or taking drungs. In ur case, being tall is important too.nyway, gud poem.
  7. coolgirl_babe

    coolgirl_babe ~STOP TRYING TO BE ME~

    Thanx guitarangela.
  8. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    I think this poem shud have gone into the lyrics section. u posted it in the wrong forum
  9. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Right you are.
    Thread moved to Poetry & Lyrics forum.
  10. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    After all, u agreed with me for the first time.
  11. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hey its jus fine...those lines do fit in it....nothin screwed it up....great goin girl... :beer:
  12. coolgirl_babe

    coolgirl_babe ~STOP TRYING TO BE ME~

    Thanx everyone for your comment

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