I once met a guy Tall, fine, and handsome Who brought sunshine Into my life Made the dark clouds go away Brought joy to the wounded heart Made me smile and my spirit sing He was my best thing Romantic walks in the park But there were cold stares Following in the dark He showered me with gifts Swirling me around in his arms Having his soft lips cover mine But then it was all gone
Good job coolgirl_babe. I liked it very much. I think u r a good poet. We both have something in common, our ID names have the same first name.
the poem is nice but that line " Tall, fine, and handsome " was the screwed up part .. (thats my opinion so pls no fighting ) .... c'mon ppz , good looking is something god gave , there is nothing to be proud of .. its juz a gift .. its the character that god didn't give u but something you built up ..... love is juz so full of crap ... i spent my whole life thinkin of 1 and it jus screwed up ... bleah .. ok this is off topic .. but nice poem .. cheers
Nice poem. Like seelan said, the man shouldn't be tall, fine or hansome to bring sunshine into ur life. He just needs a gud heart.
Well, that is true. But guy also needs to be tall, fine, and handsome. I am tall I need a guy who is tall as well. The guy should not be smoking or even taking drugs - fine. Handsome is no big deal.
that's important thing he shuldn't be smoking or taking drungs. In ur case, being tall is important too.nyway, gud poem.
