I swear, through the entire song whenver i heard you say "kaha" made laugh!lol And the ending it almost seem like ur dying due to short of breath hehe Guitaring was alright. You need to practise with this song more.
ur guitaring is good very good but not ur voice no power no feeling sing from ur chest not ur mouth i mean its not out of sur too much but not good enough to be a singer practice practice guitaring is good though