my 2nd poem~> Stars Me & Him

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by vini, Mar 11, 2005.

  1. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    . .THE STARS,ME AND HIM. ​
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    THE HIGH SKYLINE CONDESCENDING UPON THE LOW HOUSES,SEEMED A BIT CLOSER TONIGHT. AND THE STARS JUST A LEAP AWAY, GLISTENED WITH BRIGHTENED SPRITE..



    GAZING TOWARDS A DIFFERENT DIRECTION,A STAR STRUCK MY EYES..I DELIGHTFULLY ASKED ''WHO ARE YOU?..I'VE NEVER SEEN YOU BEFORE''



    TO MY SURPRISE HE REPLIED; ''I'VE ALWAYS BEEN HERE..SINCE WHEN?..EVEN I DONT REMEMBER..BUT YOU MUST HAVE MISSED ME AMONG THE CLUSTRE''



    WITH THIS I WENT DOWN THE MEMORY LANE AND DID PONDER; i always gazed at stars since childhood..i will..Indeed, Till i close my eyes!!



    THIS STAR GAZING GIVES ME BENIGN PLEASURES

    AND EVERYTIME IT MAKES ME WONDER.....me and my beloved; watch same stars, same sun, same sky, same seasons....then why is the distance......why is the loneliness....why is my heart still aching.......



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    dang..My Red Carpet is still at the Cleaners...reply anyway..how u liked dis1??!!!...lol

    tahda!
    take care
     
  2. silent_dragon

    silent_dragon Immortal guitarist

    ok now that's a new style.good work.
     
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    new style?..why? how? where?
    *confused*

    anyways..thanx!

    tahda!
     
  4. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    hmmm...liked it. good. ur frst 1 was evn bettr !! keep postin ur stuff...
     
  5. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    @ subhro

    thx a lot!
     
  6. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    u r welcome a lot. keep postin.
     
  7. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    these poems of mine.. i wrote almost a year back.. im creatin a new poem now a days..its gonna be posted soon..if i find it gud enuf :p

    tahda!
     

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