my 2nd hindi poem...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rizz, Dec 18, 2005.

  1. rizz

    rizz *Always 420*

    abe kya hai tera nam?
    kya karta hai kam?
    hai agar tujpe dam?
    to kha ek balti gum...(gum=glue)

    kha tere ass pe lath
    yehi hai mardangi ki bat
    rehta hai keu chori-shupe
    kick karenga mai teri muh pe...

    tujko hai kya pata?
    mai hi hu teri pita
    jab dunga ek mar tab
    kahege tu mujhe bap..


    this is my second hindi poem... i wish u wll accept it warmly...
    and plz ..i need replies.... :beer: :dance: :dance:
     
  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Hey rizzu

    you got a cute way of talking in hindi..
    poems like a modern time hindi rap ;)

    u can improve read something in hindi or best u speak and then u can improve
    not saying its bad
     
  3. har1s

    har1s <b>Untitled</b>

    hmm....not bad... lyrics r a bit messed up....but nice try man!! :beer:
     
  4. rizz

    rizz *Always 420*

    @thnx har1s

    @bubbly thnx 2 u also... u make me laugh..hehe modern time hindi rap... i think u can make it rap... so try it now and after recording send it...lol..
     
  5. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God


    :RollLol:

    u related to Sameer dada anyway???

    he is the badshaah of hindi gangsta rap :p:
     
  6. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :shock: :RollLol: tumhi ho mata, pita tumhi ho....thats wot came in mah mind.
    Keep writing rizz...its funny& mks me laf:Laughing:
     
  7. rizz

    rizz *Always 420*

    wizard and garima thank u....

    @wizard i dont know who is sameer .... but i think he is a good poet or lyricist..... u called me rapstar...lol..

    @ garima wat do u think... mujhe kya karna chahiye... 2 improve ma hindi...

    u also guys...
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^Panjab Kesri readna shuru karo :p:
     
  9. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    Argh !!! and what the hell is this ????
     
  10. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

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