muskaan

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Jan 22, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    saw a poem by .....i forgot but good work....will chek and write and jus this one clicked
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    Title: muskaan

    aapas main kartee thee
    battis gore baat
    hum ko bhi milvaoo bandhu,
    baki sab ke saath

    tabhi demak main padi huii
    ek chanchal si beel
    hansi,thakaa muskaan kahoo
    sab us ke hi khel

    dhalki nimisha ke sang
    naak ke ek-pag neechee
    galoon ne ghumari de kar
    makhmali parde kinchee

    allahaad iski chaal humesha
    ruke-chale sharmayee
    annk ka paani amrit ho jata
    jab saath ye pagli aayee


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    ye nimisha here dosent means our nimisha it means twickle of an eye (eye lids going down and up).....ye nimisha....nahi...vo nahi hai .....leave it
     
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ya Blessed smile by humari_divya very good poem divya...:)
     
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    wen i cud understand it s meaning.... i found this poem so interesting...
    gr8 madhuresh...
    u used word nimisha so nicely...(i never seen this word used in any poetry)
    reps for you...
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    satraight:- i didnt used ur name.
     

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