armaano ke kagaz par haqeeqat ki muhar, ruk ke hum dekhte yun hi reh gaye, kaafila saath mein toh tha magar, raah mein kahin phir se hum loot gaye. chahaton ka manzar bhi ab naagawar guzara, dard bhi khud ke daastan ban gaye. darpan ke saau tukare mein bhi dekha, tanha tab bhi the, tanha hi reh gaye. armaano ke kagaz par... khud ki tamanna na apna dard, daanv zindagi ke kuch keh se gaye. samjhauta hi shayad kismat hai, ashq chupakar bhi muskarate reh gaye. armaano ke kagaz par... naakhush hua khuda bhi ab ke is rut mein, sajde mein tere hum phir jukh gaye, qayamat bhi tassvur mein ho ab ke agar, bas nishaan ban ke yaadon mein reh gaye. armaano ke kagaz par.... rohit just four lines for theme change... talaash manzil ki jahan se roshni pe nazar ho, keh sakein hum apne dilon ki baat bhi, umang saanson mein bhar ke aaj, hoothon pe jeene ke jazbaat bhi.
this can not be called good ...... armaano ke kagaz par haqeeqat ki muhar, ruk ke hum dekhte yun hi reh gaye,...............good kaafila saath mein toh tha magar, raah mein kahin phir se hum loot gaye......bakwaas absurd now 4 next 2 lines .....absurd 4 next 2 lines ........banal ...bahuut purani baat hai..kuch naya kahoo 4 next 2 lines ...had some potential but messed afterwards.... "naakhush hua khuda bhi ab ke is rut mein, sajde mein tere hum phir jukh gaye, qayamat bhi tassvur mein ho ab ke agar, bas nishaan ban ke yaadon mein reh gaye." good-one
^^madhu said ryt... rohit u often lacks link... so think twice.. naa..thrice... naa..more than that..b4 finalising ur thoughts in words..
@madhuresh....nimi............well said.....thanks... nothing is good from the word go here.......anyways.....kick in the ass is the movement forward for me...... rohit
