murdered...little girl

got this thru a mail......

This little girl is afraid to go home
afraid of being beat and thrown
she runs to her room and closes the door
she doesn't want this anymore
"oh no, daddy is here!"
she cries in fear
she tries to be quiet, don't make a sound
But her dad storms in, and she is found
"no daddy! your drunk again,
Please don't put me through this pain!"
he grabbed her by the hair
Threw her into a chair
"Stop it daddy, your hurting me!"
he held her tight, so she couldn't get free
again, he beat her bruised little body
kicked her till she was all bloody
"shut your face up you little s|ut!"
Yelled her dad, then her body he cut
she couldn't bare the pain
she doesn't even know why she is to blame
she shuts her eyes
and prays to die
she opens them up, and calls to her mum
she watches as her dad kills her just for fun
now this girl is scared & in tears
she cries out, hoping someone hears
her dad kills her
leaves her out in the cold to suffer
this girl is only 3
and was murdered by her own daddy!!

 

godamn ...
such a dark n morbid theme ...

 

@screw driver.............i never xpected this kinda thing from you man!:annoyed:

 

another death metalist on the aking@screw :aggre:

 

yeah ...
this kinda sounds almost like death metal song ...
damn ... once again i have started feeling dark n morbid ...

shi ...

hey screwie u need to put some poems having brighter lyrics .. just as an antidote ...

 

This is horrible. Why did you even put it up here? And I dont agree with this being called Death Metal philosophy. I can't think of any death metal band that would write something like this.

 

very pessimist...............

 

why??? thats all i have 2 say

 

sad poem...i hated da part...."she watches as her dad kills her just for fun".....overall decent one.....but its givin me nu ideas for ma short film.... :think:

 

i liked it so i put it up here.....so jus chill.....life is not always good.....

 

But,....is it always this bad???????????

 

well....its jus becoz u hav never gone through anythin u mite b sayin this......

 

Hey is it a poem based on true story ?? :shock:

 

dunno ya......got it through a mail.....

 

u mus be a member of some **** site then!:

 

@ cypher: well, what do u mean short film eh?

"but its givin me nu ideas for ma short film" - Cypher...

whats this short film that u gonna make???

 

Man,......... so uv gone thru this???????????????????????????? :shock:

 

well im plannin to mak one...but am stuck wid lots of themes....i used to write short stories nd am rt now confused which one to use for da film....dis poem gave me an idea bout a short story....lets see how it wrks out...

infact i ve thot of a story inspired by dis poem....neones interested PM me...ill brief it down and pm back

 

iv not been through it......but y do u hate readin about death ya.....its a fact of life.....such things happen.....so i posted it here......

 

way to go....i think it wil turn out to b nice......