Particles of the cruel hour-glass Rain down in thirty seconds Pieces of the broken flower vase Can’t be fixed again in this span How easily one can bring smile or frown on a face How easily a ‘change’ takes place Such are the people living in this world Ten minds they use to win every race If you’re useful, you’ll be called an angel And if you’re not, you’ll be thrown like a wrapper But you’ll like them, even if you know the truth Because for getting what you want, they won’t act like stopper And if you are a girl, cross your fingers Only your luck can make you freely roam around No matter how stalwart or strong you are In the end the society will bring you down Everything’s fair in love and war, they say And love is nowhere to be seen in them So everything’s fair in war they mean Sweet excuses they give and that’s how they tempt And everyone knows ignorance is bliss So you get driven closer and closer to them And when the truth burns the curtain away You come to know about the multi-faced beast in them Never curse yourself for your private mistakes Just realize them and to get over, do all that it takes The unexplored shine and splendor of your panache Can even bring liveliness in the blown-away ash
That.........is.........just..........awesome! Miraculously simple, yet artistic, and message giving. Loved it. Forgive me for my lack of words, happens when I'm spellbound, as of now. I loved each and every line of it....keep it up gal...u made a legend just now.
whhhhoooooaaaaaa.......!!!!!!!!!!!!....huever said age made a differenc...damn ...its damn amazin'.......i loved it to d core.... u rok gal..!!!! \m/
i knew it ...u have it in you simply amazing !! reps added keep posting !! loved these lines.. If you’re useful, you’ll be called an angel And if you’re not, you’ll be thrown like a wrapper But you’ll like them, even if you know the truth Because for getting what you want, they won’t act like stopper waht i appricaite here is the that you have hit the nail on the head ... said the bare reality with such simplicity...
i must spread some reputation before giving it ( srry but i think its a mistake by moderators .. so couldnt rep u) ... ( r the modds sleeping?? ) chai peeyo jaoo ..uthoo baba ..modss ??? kitte oye ???
@prafulla: i prefer staying down to earth don't send me to cloud nine ohh thanks btw @nandita: age?? i lyk thinking beyond d boundaries...thanks for ur comments @monica: thank you i am not trying show wat i've got it's just dt i wanted to share i like writing poems on 'reality' and for reps...it's fine it's fine...i also dont understand where the mods r nowadays :* love u all
wow... "...... Everything’s fair in love and war, they say And love is nowhere to be seen in them So everything’s fair in war they mean Sweet excuses they give and that’s how they tempt ....." these lines i loved the most... ...
