Multi-faced people

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by sukriti_hats, Jun 23, 2010.

  1. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    Particles of the cruel hour-glass
    Rain down in thirty seconds
    Pieces of the broken flower vase
    Can’t be fixed again in this span

    How easily one can bring smile or frown on a face
    How easily a ‘change’ takes place
    Such are the people living in this world
    Ten minds they use to win every race

    If you’re useful, you’ll be called an angel
    And if you’re not, you’ll be thrown like a wrapper
    But you’ll like them, even if you know the truth
    Because for getting what you want, they won’t act like stopper

    And if you are a girl, cross your fingers
    Only your luck can make you freely roam around
    No matter how stalwart or strong you are
    In the end the society will bring you down

    Everything’s fair in love and war, they say
    And love is nowhere to be seen in them
    So everything’s fair in war they mean
    Sweet excuses they give and that’s how they tempt

    And everyone knows ignorance is bliss
    So you get driven closer and closer to them
    And when the truth burns the curtain away
    You come to know about the multi-faced beast in them

    Never curse yourself for your private mistakes
    Just realize them and to get over, do all that it takes
    The unexplored shine and splendor of your panache
    Can even bring liveliness in the blown-away ash
     
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    That.........is.........just..........awesome!
    Miraculously simple, yet artistic, and message giving. Loved it.
    Forgive me for my lack of words, happens when I'm spellbound, as of now.

    I loved each and every line of it....keep it up gal...u made a legend just now.
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    whhhhoooooaaaaaa.......!!!!!!!!!!!!....huever said age made a differenc...damn ...its damn amazin'.......i loved it to d core.... u rok gal..!!!! \m/ :):):):D:D:D:D
     
  4. i knew it ...u have it in you :p

    simply amazing !!

    reps added keep posting !!
    loved these lines..

    If you’re useful, you’ll be called an angel
    And if you’re not, you’ll be thrown like a wrapper
    But you’ll like them, even if you know the truth
    Because for getting what you want, they won’t act like stopper

    waht i appricaite here is the that you have hit the nail on the head ... said the bare reality with such simplicity...
     
  5. i must spread some reputation before giving it ( srry but i think its a mistake by moderators .. so couldnt rep u)


    ... ( r the modds sleeping?? ) chai peeyo jaoo ..uthoo baba ..modss ??? kitte oye ???
     
  6. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    @prafulla: i prefer staying down to earth don't send me to cloud nine ohh
    thanks btw :)

    @nandita: age?? i lyk thinking beyond d boundaries...thanks for ur comments :D

    @monica: thank you :) i am not trying show wat i've got :p it's just dt i wanted to share
    i like writing poems on 'reality'
    and for reps...it's fine it's fine...i also dont understand where the mods r nowadays

    :* love u all :)
     
  7. benchwarmer

    benchwarmer New Member

    wow...

    "......
    Everything’s fair in love and war, they say
    And love is nowhere to be seen in them
    So everything’s fair in war they mean
    Sweet excuses they give and that’s how they tempt
    ....."

    these lines i loved the most... :D...
     
  8. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I second that.
     
  9. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ahh...no
    I felt it was the most awesome thing i've read in the last so many months..
    :)
     
  10. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    very very simple and very very outstanding... i loved it !!!
     
  11. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    thanks a lot ricky and benchwarmer :) :) :)
     

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