hey i had ago at the and this is wat i got: G|-5-7-8--5-7-8---5-7-5-3-3| G|-3-5-7--3-5-7--8-7-5-5| have a go at it
overall the whole song is good. i just have one correction that might make it better. if you just add 3 after the second 3-5-7- on the last line it will sound better i think. But otherwise it was gr8 well done!