Mr Sleep!!!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by akkyy21, Dec 13, 2005.

  1. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Came up with this crap sometime ago,...... I cant sleep,... so just penned down some tp stuff,... very kiddish n all,... but who cares



    Mr Sleep Mr Sleep
    Why do u want me to count the sheep?

    With eyes closed, my mind Wanders,
    Into the World of, Les Paul's n Fender's.

    But its 3 'o clock , for gods sake,
    How much more do you want me to fake?

    So, c'mon now, gimme a break,
    N take me to the land of dreamy traits.

    Where there is fun, frolic n music all over,
    And nothing for ur soul to take cover.

    Where all that u want is very handy,
    Be it a lappy or be it a candy.

    N now am warning u, coz its 3.30 in the clock,
    Take me there where, only I rock.


    blah blah,..............................
     
  2. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    You call this crap dude???? No way! Sounds like my story.... as I sleep very late everyday...

    Cool stuff! Yeah little kiddish I agree... still reps coming your way man...........
     
  3. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Hehehe,.... good to know,.. someone's along with me,.....!!!
     
  4. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    well written...and different than most stuff posted here...

    u getting reps from me dude :beer:
     
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    reminds me of that song "mr.sandman.. bring me a dream" lol..

    cute :)
     
  6. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    that was Gr8.. reps...:)
     
  7. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Whoaa,.. 4 ppl liked,.... kewl!!
     
  8. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Fantabulous poem dude:)
    cant rep u though..gotto spread some..
     
  9. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Hey.. nice one man....
    Cool work!


    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  10. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Akkyy .. man .. this poem is like bread n butter for people like us yaar .. V are night birds .. Rock Boy Rock .. i gotta spread some more before reppin u .. but appreciation matters they say .. doesn't it :) :) :)
     
  11. shak

    shak Harrr!

    aai aii .. akky back with a bang ... a good change man!! atleast it has something to say i have been posted at a guitar tabs related website :p
     
  12. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Uh huh,...... i forgot i had posted this, n cant sleep again :(,....................

    All who replied here,..........thnx for likin it!!!!!!!!!!1
     
  13. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    I agree with you on this one.
     
  14. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    wow

    this forum is turning into poet's galore.
    gud job dude...smthng diff.
     
  15. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    man...i got some competition now in crap race..hhee..akky mast ahey boss !!!!
     
  16. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ya nice...mr sleep....i woud say miss sleep...
     
  17. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    this is d best poem in igt :grin:. reps str8awy!!
     
  18. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    great poem.... rytly said pamposh its poet's galore opening up here...

    can i ask u a silly question...
    why its MR. sleep... n why not... Miss sleep...
    if u imagine bout Miss sleep...she may come to you early...
     
  19. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.


    ohh... to madhuresh.. aapne yeh humse pehle soch liya...:nw:
     

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