Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by tejas, Nov 28, 2004.

  1. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Well, some of you might have already read this. But for those who haven't, here it goes.


    Calm and collected, full of positivity
    Kind and forgiving, Honesty his protection
    Morality above law, Truthful to all
    Never wished ill, upon anyone

    Oh! how perfect this sight seems to be.
    But should we believe? Sometimes eyes decieve.

    Cold and conniving, no trace of mercy
    Violent and unforgiving, hatred overflows
    Ruthless and Remorseless, No place for guilt
    None matters but self, will do anything it takes

    Oh! how horrid this sight seems to be.
    Could it be the truth we must believe.

    Some change with seasons,
    He changed with moments.
    A piece of art on the outside,
    Filthy blood flows within

    All it needs is provocation,
    The demon will surely rise
    Its just a matter of time,
    Before the beast engulfs the positive side
    And the era of the devil shall begin,
    Behold everyone, For the Beast has risen.

    ┬ęCOPYRIGHT Tejas 2004

    Tell me what you think...
  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Nice one Tejas...

    Keep them coming...

  3. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    whoa...deep stuff man....
    good one........made me think abut myself.....
  4. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Thanks Zoom and Saurabh. Dr., yeah, guess who i wrote this about(not you, incase ur wondering).
  5. Natasia

    Natasia ...

    gr88 work dude ....... who is it abt ?????? :think:
  6. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C bush :D:D:D:D:D:D:
    my apologies
  7. tejas

    tejas ..........

    @saurabh, bush. Hehe. he doesn't pretend to be good, he's just
  8. 6String_assasin

    6String_assasin The Painkiller

    that, was cool, tejas.
  9. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    on a more serious note.....i guess that could define general human nature i guess
  10. Venus

    Venus New Member

    @tejas: really nice poem........didn't know we had so many good writers on IGT....:)
    @DrSaurabh: yeah, i no wot u mean, i can see myself in parts of it as well..........
  11. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Told ya it was a great one tejas:)
  12. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Excellent, tejas... I was awaiting one from u... now ill expect more...
  13. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Thanks to all of u. And yeah, essi, i'll pst more soon. Thanks for the support.
  14. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Support is given to a talented person bro:) Whaddaya make out of that?:)
  15. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    hey tejas , gr8 work

    u wrote this for whom :think:
  16. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    i knew you had poetic talent tejas.....human nature i guess but still you had someone specific in mind when you wrote this.....:think: who could it be??
  17. tejas

    tejas ..........

    I had myself in my mind. Guilty conscience.
  18. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    I'll personally rate this as one of the best i have read on this forum... keep 'em coming tejas.
  19. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Oh thanks, im flattered. I'll try not to disappoint you....
  20. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    yeah you bet, ;-)

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