::: Move On :::

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nikamma1112, Apr 8, 2005.

  1. nikamma1112

    nikamma1112 New Member

    It's sometimes difficult
    To float in the ocean of memories,
    As the past tends to follow you
    And the heart refuses to forget and move on.

    Glimpses from yesterday flash across your vision.
    Your memories cage you as if you're in prison.
    The past is a hound and to it you're bound
    And the heart refuses to forget and move on.

    The sun will soon rise and the morrow ain't far
    But darkness hasn't fled and still visible are the scars
    You touch them, they scream with pain, as your heart sobs
    And refuses to forget and move on.

    A tear falls and moist turns the ground.
    You wail, but it's eerie as you hear no sound.
    You search in your memories, but pain's all you found
    And your heart refuses to forget and move on.

    Move on's what it must, but move on's what it can't.
    It gets lost in time, and move ain't what it does.
    Move on's what it should to continue beatin'
    But the heart declines and stop a-tickin'.

    - Raj.

    P.S. Comments?
     
  2. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    You wail, but it's eerie as you hear no sound.
    You search in your memories, but pain's all you found

    wow its excellent....so real yet beautiful
     
  3. nikamma1112

    nikamma1112 New Member

    Thanks browneyegurlie ...

    - Raj.
     
  4. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    WOW... !!!!
    those 2 line browneye mentiond r superb.. so is da whole of da poemm
    reps if it permits.
    keep postin !!

    EDIT: sh!t. sprd sum reps!.
     
  5. nikamma1112

    nikamma1112 New Member

    Thanks, Subhro :beer: And as Bandbaaja says, appreciation is enough :-D

    Vaise, check out my other threads in this section. Have written a few so-called poems, or rather, attempts at rhyme :eek:: , and haven't got too many responses ... :mad:

    - Raj.
     

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