Hi, I just found this place so I thought I would post one of my poems. Ive read some of the other ones that people have posted and my style seems to be different so I hope I still fit in here. “Monster” Living inside me feeding off your pain Eating away at the sparkle in your eyes Like poison coursing through my body Loosen my chains I only want a taste Hiding from the sirens filling the air Painting the night red and blue Before they come for me Take my hand and follow me through These nightmares and torn pages written as my life Like a vampire feeding off your tears Thirsty for your blood your heart on my plate Take this silver bullet and put it through my head Take my life now I don’t deserve to live I live only to hurt you I live only to take A monster disguised in my love to lure you in Under the full moon please grant me this last kiss I need it now before it’s too late Set me free with the antidote laced on your lips Only you can set me free Only you can burn me at the steaks Hiding in the shadows protecting you from me I can’t look you in the eyes I can’t tarnish those innocent blue eyes Slowly turning red from the tears I’ve caused you to shed As you sleep so innocently in the night I’ll whisper the words that mean everything to me But words don’t mean anything to you
the lyrics sounds very identical to what i used to write 1 1/2 yrs back.i like your thougt somehow its a good work.keep 'em up!
