hi... back again............ ur comments are my treasure finally god blessed us with the impending news.... our family will be complete after nine months the little bundle of joy will make our family complete... the liitle hands, the cute face..the closed eyes and fist the small legs... the sweetest honey... my dream to be father will be soon be in my hand... doctor said me...we can save only one either baby or my wife speechless and strangulated by emotions.... chaos runs into my vein i asked for god to help me..... still outside the labour room i am alone with noone to decide whom to choose.... i lost again.......finding the dreams in the midway i lost again.......searching solutions to my woes i lost my life and dreams for whom i cared till ....i lost both i paid the bill and walked towards home holding the doll and sitting on bed... calling wife for a cup of tea.... facing the moments of truth..........
Impeccable.... very well written and expressed. I have only one word for such a thing... Immaculate !!
Rohit wonderfully expressed and just mind blowing cant find words to how well you have written..simply awesome :rock:
wonderful n so touching gr8 one i also want 2 say something understand the reality of life and truth (sometimes it’s bitter and out of our control). Life is so fragile for all of us and sometimes it’s really difficult for us to understand as to why things happened to us. Believe its not just one person, no one is spared in this world from those kinds of ups and downs(here or there,yes or no) and we have to face tough times in our lives. may god bless all
hey astro ! tis was truely an amazin interpretation....... hats off to yu my man....... really heartfelt..... i also scribble at times but nothin tis intense........ tis is really some work........ keep it up. Brknhrt
@nimishaa........person who creates herself so much of beautiful imagination on paper....and words from her.....its something great for me..... @knight_ki_gf aka varshita......thanks for appreciation @sweetie.....your comment is the catalyst for me @ujsen..........yes i am the same person @dawn2rock ,brokenheart_k5.............thanks to you nimi..........while creating the concept i was never numb.........but the feeling of numbness engulfed me .........still i am taking time to come out of the feelings i created on paper..... if i be able to connect to the readers..its the success of creation....thanks to all for reading................. rohit astroguru26
@rohit... well.. sometimes..u never know..what magic ur words gonna create...unless u write down ur thoughts n mind completely..on piece of paper... gr8 going...! keep it up....
@astroguru: WOW! im totally flabbergasted :shock:This really is an awesome peice of writing. How did you decide on a topic like this tho?
thanks for appreciation.....decision to write on the topic depends on the sensitivity to feel.....and imagine the things ..i guess u got the point rohit astroguru26
