Mizaz

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Babydoll, Feb 26, 2006.

  1. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Yuh berukhi se dekh kar humko wo chal diye
    Jaise ke ab wo humein jaante nahi

    Kal tak jo humein apna kehte the gesuo se lipat kar
    Kya aaj wo humein pehchante nahi

    Kayi sawaalo ke jawab ke jawaab talab karne hai mujhe
    Par wo hai ke mujhse guftagu karna chahte nahi

    Pyar to unhe bhi hai humse bohot
    Haa ye kahiye ke wo maante nahi
     
  2. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    superb....kya andaaz hai...lazavab...:)
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ....excellent...subhaan allah ...abhi iss se jyada urdu aati nahi ....varna vo bhi
    seriously this is waht is called...simply mast..mere pass bhi ek sher hai iske javaab ke liye ;)

    kehne ki kyaa unn ko jururat, jo dil se apna mannte hain...
    durioon main paas hian, khaamooshiyan pechante hain...
    tum humare dard ke nazdeek tak aao-na-aao
    hum tumahari preet ko, pchlae janam se jaante hain..!!
     
  4. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Beautiful...
    Few lines from my side:


    aapko sab keh du..
    yeh badi ulzan hai..

    Dil ka rista hai..
    Phir in lafzon mein kya rakha hai?

    Sab kehkar samajna acha nahi..
    Jara in dhadkono ko sun liya karo ..


    Keep writing...

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  5. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR


    Hey @zoom..you should right regularly:cool:
     
  6. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx Zoom :)
     
  7. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    lovely lines....keep writing............


    rohit
    astroguru26
     
  8. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    bahut achche...kya baat hai............dil hai ki maanta nahin
     
  9. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx abt aap ka dil kya nahi maanta ye samaj main nahi aaya ;)
     
  10. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again


    Pyaar toh unhe bhi bohot hain humse
    haan lekin izhaar kar nahi paa rahe woh humse


    aisa kaisa hain.. :think:
     
  11. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx rohit
     

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