Yuh berukhi se dekh kar humko wo chal diye Jaise ke ab wo humein jaante nahi Kal tak jo humein apna kehte the gesuo se lipat kar Kya aaj wo humein pehchante nahi Kayi sawaalo ke jawab ke jawaab talab karne hai mujhe Par wo hai ke mujhse guftagu karna chahte nahi Pyar to unhe bhi hai humse bohot Haa ye kahiye ke wo maante nahi
....excellent...subhaan allah ...abhi iss se jyada urdu aati nahi ....varna vo bhi seriously this is waht is called...simply mast..mere pass bhi ek sher hai iske javaab ke liye kehne ki kyaa unn ko jururat, jo dil se apna mannte hain... durioon main paas hian, khaamooshiyan pechante hain... tum humare dard ke nazdeek tak aao-na-aao hum tumahari preet ko, pchlae janam se jaante hain..!!
Beautiful... Few lines from my side: aapko sab keh du.. yeh badi ulzan hai.. Dil ka rista hai.. Phir in lafzon mein kya rakha hai? Sab kehkar samajna acha nahi.. Jara in dhadkono ko sun liya karo .. Keep writing... REgards, Zooom..!!
Pyaar toh unhe bhi bohot hain humse haan lekin izhaar kar nahi paa rahe woh humse aisa kaisa hain.. :think: