Missing you...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Nirvanafreak, Feb 19, 2005.

  1. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    Feeling hopeless-wish you were here,
    All my thoughts are filled with fear,
    Are you thinking of me now?
    I wanna see you,but I don't know how,
    You're so far away...too far way,
    Every time you're here,I wish you could stay...

    'Cause I'm missing you every time you're gone,
    You're the missing part of me,we're one...

    Do you love me the way I love you?
    Or do you hate me like I expect you to do?
    Maybe I'm too ****in' insecure,
    Everything about you' is so ****in' pure,
    I'm afraid to be worthless,but that's what I am,
    I would do anything for you,damn...

    'Cause I'm missing you every time you're gone,
    You're the missing part of me,we're one...
    rockin'away and Subhro like this.
  2. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    'Cause I'm missing you every time you're gone,
    You're the missing part of me,we're one...
    This poem is worth bein made in2 a song :p:
    givin u reps.
  3. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    hehe,thnx a lot...I'll keep the song part in mind :rockon:
  4. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Ahh... the feeling of Missing You...
    Hundreds and thousands times expressed...
    but each time its UNIQUE in its own way!

    Lovers Heart always stay young!
    So keep Missing...

  5. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    aaaaha...another good one...keep em coming dude..love reading these kinds of poems...
  6. ^^ nice one nirvana freak
  7. agni

    agni New Member

    nice one....touched my heart this poem...so similar to my heart's woes....
  8. rockin'away

    rockin'away Banned

    this rocks once again mate.. this time i have to give reps:):)
  9. nadish

    nadish Active Member

    This one's really a good one. Weldone Nirvana
  10. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    good one, buddy. I don't know why it reminds me of radiohead's creep.
  11. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    :) thanks a lot for your positive comments...this thread is getting very close to becoming my very first hot thread :p
  12. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    hey maverick,about the stuff about radiohead's creep:
    Radiohead: You're so ****in' special
    Me: Everything about you is so ****in' pure
    and the stuff about being worthless is also quite the same as creep,so I see your point ;)
  13. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    u nailed it, NF...
  14. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    uuh...what exactly do you mean by that? :think:
  15. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    Just wanted to say, u got it right (about creep).
  16. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

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