Dear all, here is something.. which i never wanted to write.... chehre par khusi aaj bhi tumhe dikhegi.. kyunki hasna meri aadat ban chuki hai.. sochta hun kya hoga agar kisi roz.. main hasna bhul jau.. yun to zakhm bahut hai is dil mein chupe.. par sochta hun kya hoga agar kisi roz.. ye zakhm tumhare samne ubhar aaye.. haste chehre pe tumhe pani ki kuch boonden dikhengi.. sukhe honton pe kuch pyas ki dararen dikhengi.. dusron ko hasta dekhna meri kamzoori hai.. par sochta hun kya hoga kisi roz.. agar haste haste in aankon se pani girne lage.. meri tanhai ke snnate mein ghoonzi ek awaaz ho tum.. mere dil-e-samundar ke viraane mein chupi ek sailaab ho tum.. par sochta hun kya hoga kisi roz.. agar ye nadiya is pyase samandar se na mil paye.. jab aapni aankhen kholun to ye sapna tut jaye... band mutthee khule to baas tanhayee reh jaye.. ye dil uske intezaar mein hi kahin akele mein dum tod jaye.. There is sumthing in this world in which u hv no control.... n thats destiny...
bahut accha.... ek shayar ne kaha hai " DArd main to kuch kaha jata nahi Kintu chuup bhi to raha jata nahi Cheekh utath-ta hai ye maan laachaar ho kar DArd jab uss se saha jata nahi !! "
u never wanted to write that? well, it's good that u did, it's awesome and.. what's with the "z"? inspired by nimmo?? LOL... i guess u mean, goonji?
Thanx madhuresh for that lovely shayari.. and cryptu thanx for understanding my emotions... usually i don't like to get emotional.. thats why i don't write such poems.. but this poem is very special close to my heart...
THTAS AWESOME..! that concept is too good... i wonder..y it didnt occcur to me first? vishwaa.. ur poem seems to be written in free style..but reading it..i cud find my own rhymes to make it diff n more rhyming in terms of poetry.. i hope u dont mind my attempt to rewrite this poem of urs.. hope u like it..the way i modified.. : (n i know u wont mind ur nimmo) : abb hasna to meri aadat ban chuki hai shayad ye gam,chehre ke hansi me dhul gaye.. sochta hu.. kya hoga agar kisi roz jo iss chehre ki silwate hasnaa hi bhul gaye.. yun to zakhm bahot hai iss dil me.. sochta hu.. kya hoga agar kisi roz jo ye chupaaye huye zakhm..tumhare samne khul gaye.. hanste chehere pe kuch ashq chal-chalayenge.. sukhe hoth kisi ki pyaas me machal jayenge.. dusron ko hasta dekhna meri kamzori hai par sochta hu, kya hoga kisi roz.. jo aankhon me dil ke tufaan utar aayenge.. meri tanhaayi ke sannate me gunji ek aawaz ho tum.. mere dil-e-samunder ke viraane me chupa ek sailaab ho tum.. par sochta hu..kya hoga kisi roz.. agar ye nadiya iss pyase samundar se na mil paye.. tarsataa rahe bhawaraa..koi phool na khil paye.. jab apni aankhe kholu to ye sapna tut jaye.. jarra piche mud ke dekhu to parchaai bhi ruth jaye.. bandh mutthi kholu to kahi tanhaayi bhi hume chod jaye.. ye dil usske intezaar mein kahi akele hi na dum tod jaaye..
i m speechless nimoo.. i hv just one sentence for u.. i love u nimmo.. just for that.. ur poetry gave a new touch to my emotions.. thanx for understanding that and re-writing it.. now i m more emotional : and i need a jadu ki jhappi :-(
glad u liked it... or some egoistic senseless person wud have objected my pure intensions of understanding ur poem deeply..n my attempt to modify it.. jaadu ki zappi coming ur way vishwaa.....
