Mera Vartaman

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by souman_das, Apr 18, 2006.

  1. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    hi people,
    i am submitting a creation of mine which i wrote in an on-the-spot creative writing competition organised by hindi sahitya sabha, govtt. of delhi.
    as a matter of fact,i won the first prize.






    "Mera Vartaman"


    raat andheri thi, par tanha nahin
    kaal ki syahi se likhi is kavita ka janam usi raat ko hua tha.

    yeh kisi kavi ka prayas nahi,
    jo ki vastavikta ke prakash se koso door ho,
    yeh hain yatharth satya, vastavik aur jivant.

    kyonki main ek insaan hun, is prithvi ke vaksh par khada ek insaan.
    tanha besahara dar dar bhatakne ko majboor kiya hain mujhe.

    chahat ko aagaz di thi maine,
    isi chahat ne anjaam diya hain mujhe.
    sapno ki senj sajayi thi maine,
    unhi sapno ke gharondo ko bikharte dekha hain maine.

    aaj fir wahi kali raat hain,
    ret par door tak faile pad chinhon ki tarah lag raha hain mera ateet.
    samne door timtimata akela tara hi hain shayad mera bhavishya,

    lekin in ke beech main kahan hain mera vartman?










    do let me know how you felt about it.
    i again say that this a creation in proses and not verses.
    waiting for your comments.



    regards,
    Souman

    :beer:
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    acchi hai...
     
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    awesome...!!

    finally...some ''''REAL'''' hindi...
    no wonder it got 1st prize..
     
  4. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    thanks nimisha and maduresh.

    regards,
    Souman
     

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