Sometime you feel that its only one person you need to live life... Mera aashiyaana, jaana tune banayaa Apne haantho se mera jeevan savaraa Mera aashiyaana, jaana tune banayaa... Tune hi mujhe zindaagi jina shikhayaa Tune hi apno se mujhe milna shikhayaa Meri dhadakano ko dhadakna bataayaa Mera aashiyaana, jaana tune banayaa... Mera ab sab kuch tera o jaana Zee raha huin ab to teri saanso se jaana Teri aankhon mein apna sapna mein ne payaa Mera aashiyaana, jaana tune banayaa... Hope you all will like it!
Bohot khub..:rock: aise hi likhte rahiyega.. Maine Dil Ko Rakha Hai Khaali Isme Aashiyan Apna Basao Tum Nigahein Hai Suni Tere Aks Ki Khatir Ban Tasveer Inme Abh Samaao Tum Dil Main Armaan Hazaron Machalte Hai Gaav-E-Judai Pe Didaar-E-Dava Lagao Tum Bahut Ho Chuki Abh Dillagi Ye Tumhari Chodho Do Ye Shararat Karib Aa Jaao Tum Maine Dil Ko Rakha Hai Khaali Isme Aashiyan Apna Basao Tum
pretty nice poem dude.. but don't understand this one line.. u wrote there.. ^^ is this girl u talking about is a girl or "pacemaker" ? but a nice job in other lines.. !! reps coming ur way..
thanks for reps... yeah she is pacemaker : what is the difference between "zinda rahna" and "jeena"? same difference and transition is meant in that line.
if you really want to diagnose further...I have used word "bataayaa" not "sikhayaa". (dhadakane dhadakti hain per kiske liye)
Here is my account on soundclick, you can listen to this song... https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=485700