Mera aashiyaana

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by amit82cse, Feb 12, 2006.

  1. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    Sometime you feel that its only one person you need to live life...

    Mera aashiyaana, jaana tune banayaa
    Apne haantho se mera jeevan savaraa

    Mera aashiyaana, jaana tune banayaa...

    Tune hi mujhe zindaagi jina shikhayaa
    Tune hi apno se mujhe milna shikhayaa
    Meri dhadakano ko dhadakna bataayaa

    Mera aashiyaana, jaana tune banayaa...

    Mera ab sab kuch tera o jaana
    Zee raha huin ab to teri saanso se jaana
    Teri aankhon mein apna sapna mein ne payaa

    Mera aashiyaana, jaana tune banayaa...


    Hope you all will like it!
     
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  2. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    Bohot khub..:rock: aise hi likhte rahiyega..

    Maine Dil Ko Rakha Hai Khaali
    Isme Aashiyan Apna Basao Tum

    Nigahein Hai Suni Tere Aks Ki Khatir
    Ban Tasveer Inme Abh Samaao Tum

    Dil Main Armaan Hazaron Machalte Hai
    Gaav-E-Judai Pe Didaar-E-Dava Lagao Tum

    Bahut Ho Chuki Abh Dillagi Ye Tumhari
    Chodho Do Ye Shararat Karib Aa Jaao Tum

    Maine Dil Ko Rakha Hai Khaali
    Isme Aashiyan Apna Basao Tum
     
  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    Here is the recording,,,,



    I checked this link is working...
     
  4. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thanks.....
     
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  5. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    pretty nice poem dude.. but don't understand this one line.. u wrote there..




    ^^ is this girl u talking about is a girl or "pacemaker" ?


    but a nice job in other lines.. !! reps coming ur way..
     
  6. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    keep it up man! :)
     
  7. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thanks for reps...

    yeah she is pacemaker :p:
    what is the difference between "zinda rahna" and "jeena"? same difference and transition is meant in that line.
     
  8. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    if you really want to diagnose further...I have used word "bataayaa" not "sikhayaa". (dhadakane dhadakti hain per kiske liye)
     
  9. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

  10. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    nice poem amit....
    and recording is even more nice than that...!
     
  11. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thanks iLLuSiOniSt....
     

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