I usually don't write poems/lyrics belonging to this category. But this is an exception. There is a tune associated with it, without which it will appear a bit incomplete... Memories Late, at night I was walking and I saw Trees in the moonlight. And then sweet memories came, flooding... It seems so strange now. Memories, of times when you were with me How we used to laugh and talk all the time And how you used to come to me and smile... Your smile, how it used to save me, But now its gone... Memories, of times when I was with you The way I called you, and how you called me Days and nights and in dreams I was with you Caught in your laughter, held by your eyes But now you're gone... When then, will you come back to me again Or am I holding on to a hope that is not there Blame me, I shall grant you to hate me But do not throw me away from your memories... Memories, are all that I have to live with It all seems like a distant dream now. A new day will come; and our lives will go on But I shall always live inside my memories Of you and me... And I know that you will be too. Those days are over but my love shall cover The night sky like the moonlight... And its for you.
What can I say, but beautiful? If this was written for a real person, man is she lucky! It's quite fine without the tune ( whatever it is) but why don't you try and write down the tune too. It'll be nice to hum along....
Hey dont u write poetry. U can do better this this if u carry on with poetry or lyrics. But ne way, that's nice infact gud
Definitely not your regular style. But its still very good. Simple and effective. Good work essi. And aren't you gonna post the second part of that other poem?? Oh, I forgot the name. I'll post after i search for it. I was really looking forward to it.
Found the link. https://indianguitartabs.com/showthread.php?t=4345 Where is the second part?? I want it. And those who haven't read the first part of the poem i'm referring to, follow the link. Its one of the best i've seen on this board so far.
The second part? I still haven't figured out exactly what to write... I only have a vague idea... i think it will take some time.
