Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by esgallindeion, Mar 6, 2005.

  1. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    I usually don't write poems/lyrics belonging to this category. But this is an exception. There is a tune associated with it, without which it will appear a bit incomplete...


    Late, at night I was walking and I saw
    Trees in the moonlight.
    And then sweet memories came, flooding...
    It seems so strange now.

    Memories, of times when you were with me
    How we used to laugh and talk all the time
    And how you used to come to me and smile...
    Your smile, how it used to save me,
    But now its gone...
    Memories, of times when I was with you
    The way I called you, and how you called me
    Days and nights and in dreams I was with you
    Caught in your laughter, held by your eyes
    But now you're gone...

    When then, will you come back to me again
    Or am I holding on to a hope that is not there
    Blame me, I shall grant you to hate me
    But do not throw me away from your memories...
    Memories, are all that I have to live with
    It all seems like a distant dream now.

    A new day will come; and our lives will go on
    But I shall always live inside my memories
    Of you and me...
    And I know that you will be too.

    Those days are over but my love shall cover
    The night sky like the moonlight...
    And its for you.
  2. rev

    rev New Member

    What can I say, but beautiful? If this was written for a real person, man is she lucky! It's quite fine without the tune ( whatever it is) but why don't you try and write down the tune too. It'll be nice to hum along....
  3. nadish

    nadish Active Member

    Hey dont u write poetry. U can do better this this if u carry on with poetry or lyrics. But ne way, that's nice infact gud
  4. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Definitely not your regular style. But its still very good. Simple and effective. Good work essi. And aren't you gonna post the second part of that other poem?? Oh, I forgot the name. I'll post after i search for it. I was really looking forward to it.
  5. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Essi, bro, one word, amazing!:)
  6. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Found the link.

    Where is the second part?? I want it. And those who haven't read the first part of the poem i'm referring to, follow the link. Its one of the best i've seen on this board so far.
  7. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    The second part? I still haven't figured out exactly what to write... I only have a vague idea... i think it will take some time.
  8. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Okay, take your time, but do write it. I want to read it.

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