This is in response to @knight_ki_gf's thread and @garima's comment. Meri mohbbat ke dam pe, teri nafraaton ke chal te Un yaadon ke dam pe, en bandeesho ke chal te Mein ne jeena sheekh liyaa hai, Bin tere saath chal ke Chaaha nahi puja tha tujhe In palkoo pe baitha yaa tujhe Tune meri jaan li, meri jaan ban ke Mein ne jeena sheekh liyaa hai, bin tere saath chal ke... Sab kuch saunpa apna tujhe Dhadkano mein meri basaaya tujhe Tune meri saans rooki, meri saans ban ke Mein ne jeena sheekh liyaa hai, bin tere saath chal ke... : Aisa lag raha hai ki janta ka ruujhan mere songs ki taraf kam hota jaa raha hai:think: . Janta prove me wrong And one more thing, next time no senti song :annoyed: its going to be dance number from me :dance: Let me see..will i stand or not :
i'd say..very good attempt!!..i wonder why no1 replied/gave feedback..specially kgf and garima, like u said
thanks vini.... sometime you just let it go....feedback aata hai to theek hai varna "chal raahi apni raah pe"....
Bohot hi aacha likha hai aapne amit :rock: aur humne ki koshish aapko jawab bhi dene ki kuch kahiyega zaroor inn shabdon par...shukriya Tune jeena sikha chalna bin mere sahare Chaha tha maine bhi tujko Par palkon aansu ban kar baha diya tumne maine khud ki jaan li teri jaan baan ke Saupa tha zaroor tune aapna saab kuch aur rakha bhi tha humne sambhal ke par dhadkane hi dhoka de gayi to saanso ka kya tha kasoor.....!!!
: sorry Amit...for being a lil late....ws so damn busy dint get a chance to check ur song....now i did... & its reeellly awesome....i dint write anythng for so long now....better i shud get bk with pen n paper.... & this poem :rock:
wow....perfect response....was just thinking it can become very good duet...and one step further...film this song on "serial kisser" boy and tanushreeyaa dutta...and movie is AKSAR...:
First of all my apologies for being so late. Its awesome... I can totally relate to what you have written. Maybe it stands as a continuation to my thread !! Ok amit... must say... u ve made me write again...even though in bits and pieces... but still...this is somewhat in context with what you have written Tujhe itna jo maan diya mene apne pyar ka ki zindagi saath guzaarne ka waada de diya Pata na tha ki tu rah mein tanha chod jayega Tood kar har ek vaada jo kiya Itna na yakeen tha tujhe mere pyaar pe ki ek andhi se darr tu thukra usse chal diya ab jab baithi sochti hu guzre lamho ko waqt ke andheron ne mujhe nazarband kar diya
This one is on your signature... NOW is nothing more than a living example of years of time and opportunity wasted and love lost... NOW is really more than a living example of years of time yet to come and opportunity unexplored and love to come back...
Thank you... but no.. i would say the feelings are. Hmmm... you seem to be an optimist... while i m a die hard pessimist !!
hmmmm....want to write more...but let it go... bye for now... Waiting eagerly for a new day, I know its going to be fantastic, Thanks NIGHT for letting me realize appreciating new DAY everyday.
What a day!!! 8:45 am boss calling on mobile, r u sleeping, anyway u r required by 10 am [damn't can't get enough sleep] 9:15 am boss calling on mobile, i will pick u on my way, will be there bu 9:50 [damn't he knows i will not be able to make it myself] 10:15 am meeting starts 11:30 am boss has to go but "you guys should continue till its done" [damn't it have to be there till its done] 3:00 pm another meeting, hosted by me [damn't they didn't informed me in advanced] 4:00 pm sirun in the building, emergengy, everybody please come out in ground [damn't it was just the fire escape drill] 4:30 pm its snacks time after drill [damn't its a huge queue on counter, even paid one] 4:55 pm boss calling, what happend to meeting, please re-schedule for tomorrow [damn't then what i have done today] 5:35 pm lets go play pool, refreshing... [damn't its already 8 people in line] 6:00 pm lets go check emails [damn't windows need re-start after updates] 6:35 pm lets surf IGT [damn't no new post of interest] 7:57 pm lets complete pending review comments [damn't sent those to wrong person] 8:15 pm lets book tickets for movie tomorrow [damn't housefull] 8:30 pm lets write this day to IGT [damn't boss is calling again] .....rest after chatting with him.....
ok guys and gals...checkout composition for this song...:rock: https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=485700 please post your comments (ande ya tamator all accepted from you nice people):
