Mein ne jeena sheekh liyaa

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by amit82cse, Feb 13, 2006.

  1. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    This is in response to @knight_ki_gf's thread and @garima's comment.

    Meri mohbbat ke dam pe, teri nafraaton ke chal te
    Un yaadon ke dam pe, en bandeesho ke chal te

    Mein ne jeena sheekh liyaa hai, Bin tere saath chal ke

    Chaaha nahi puja tha tujhe
    In palkoo pe baitha yaa tujhe
    Tune meri jaan li, meri jaan ban ke

    Mein ne jeena sheekh liyaa hai, bin tere saath chal ke...

    Sab kuch saunpa apna tujhe
    Dhadkano mein meri basaaya tujhe
    Tune meri saans rooki, meri saans ban ke

    Mein ne jeena sheekh liyaa hai, bin tere saath chal ke...

    :eek:: Aisa lag raha hai ki janta ka ruujhan mere songs ki taraf kam hota jaa raha hai:think: . Janta prove me wrong;)

    And one more thing, next time no senti song :annoyed: its going to be dance number from me :dance:

    Let me see..will i stand or not :p:
    abhimanjrekar likes this.
  2. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    i'd say..very good attempt!!..i wonder why no1 replied/gave feedback..specially kgf and garima, like u said
  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thanks vini....

    sometime you just let it aata hai to theek hai varna "chal raahi apni raah pe"....
  4. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    Bohot hi aacha likha hai aapne amit :rock: aur humne ki koshish aapko jawab bhi dene ki kuch kahiyega zaroor inn shabdon par...shukriya

    Tune jeena sikha chalna bin mere sahare
    Chaha tha maine bhi tujko
    Par palkon aansu ban kar baha diya tumne
    maine khud ki jaan li teri jaan baan ke

    Saupa tha zaroor tune aapna saab
    kuch aur rakha bhi tha humne sambhal ke
    par dhadkane hi dhoka de gayi to saanso ka kya tha kasoor.....!!!
  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :eek:: sorry Amit...for being a lil so damn busy dint get a chance to check ur i did...
    & its reeellly awesome....i dint write anythng for so long now....better i shud get bk with pen n paper....
    & this poem :rock:
  6. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thanks and goodluck!
  7. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    wow....perfect response....was just thinking it can become very good duet...and one step this song on "serial kisser" boy and tanushreeyaa dutta...and movie is AKSAR...:p:
  8. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    First of all my apologies for being so late.
    Its awesome... I can totally relate to what you have written. Maybe it stands as a continuation to my thread !!
    Ok amit... must say... u ve made me write again...even though in bits and pieces... but still...this is somewhat in context with what you have written

    Tujhe itna jo maan diya mene apne pyar ka
    ki zindagi saath guzaarne ka waada de diya
    Pata na tha ki tu rah mein tanha chod jayega
    Tood kar har ek vaada jo kiya
    Itna na yakeen tha tujhe mere pyaar pe
    ki ek andhi se darr tu thukra usse chal diya
    ab jab baithi sochti hu guzre lamho ko
    waqt ke andheron ne mujhe nazarband kar diya
  9. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    my are simply awesome...(i mean your poems ;) )
  10. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    This one is on your signature...

    NOW is nothing more than a living example of years of time and opportunity wasted and love lost...

    NOW is really more than a living example of years of time yet to come and opportunity unexplored and love to come back...
  11. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you... but no.. i would say the feelings are.

    Hmmm... you seem to be an optimist... while i m a die hard pessimist !! :)
  12. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    hmmmm....want to write more...but let it go...

    bye for now...

    Waiting eagerly for a new day, I know its going to be fantastic,
    Thanks NIGHT for letting me realize appreciating new DAY everyday.
  13. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    What a day!!!

    8:45 am
    boss calling on mobile, r u sleeping, anyway u r required by 10 am
    [damn't can't get enough sleep]

    9:15 am
    boss calling on mobile, i will pick u on my way, will be there bu 9:50
    [damn't he knows i will not be able to make it myself]

    10:15 am
    meeting starts

    11:30 am
    boss has to go but "you guys should continue till its done"
    [damn't it have to be there till its done]

    3:00 pm
    another meeting, hosted by me
    [damn't they didn't informed me in advanced]

    4:00 pm
    sirun in the building, emergengy, everybody please come out in ground
    [damn't it was just the fire escape drill]

    4:30 pm
    its snacks time after drill
    [damn't its a huge queue on counter, even paid one]

    4:55 pm
    boss calling, what happend to meeting, please re-schedule for tomorrow
    [damn't then what i have done today]

    5:35 pm
    lets go play pool, refreshing...
    [damn't its already 8 people in line]

    6:00 pm
    lets go check emails
    [damn't windows need re-start after updates]

    6:35 pm
    lets surf IGT
    [damn't no new post of interest]

    7:57 pm
    lets complete pending review comments
    [damn't sent those to wrong person]

    8:15 pm
    lets book tickets for movie tomorrow
    [damn't housefull]

    8:30 pm
    lets write this day to IGT
    [damn't boss is calling again] after chatting with him.....
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^All the best for 2moro ;)
  15. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thanks...after all every passing moment of today is property of yesterday....
  16. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

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