Mein Aur Meri Bewafaai… Aasman aur saagar ka milna dour ufaaqon main dekhne ko mila Magar yahin par mujh jeisse ek dhokebaaz pehchaanne ko mila Ousska mera milna jeisse ek dariye ke do kinaaron ka milna tha Raftaar-e leher main mujh ko ek pyaar ke laash bahaane ko mila Oussko apni wafaaon ke badle mujh kaafir se tamanna aur kya thi Kayi mouddatton ke baad ousske masoom dil doukhaane ko mila Jane keissi tishnagi thi jo aab-e hayaat pikar bhi anboujh hi rahi Isse boujhane ko aakhir ousske hi neer-e ishq jazb karne ko mila Harjaai shayad hi hai yahan koyi , ishq pe marne wale hein sabhi Meherbani hai meri jo aapko ek deedaar-e bewafaa karne ko mila Iss bhari mehfil main chaahe wah wah mile ya na mile “Amanush” Tujhe apne hi iss naam-e bewafaai par kouch sher likhne ko mila Ufaaqon: Horizons Tishnagi: Thirst Aab-e hayaat: Nectar Neer-e ishq jazb karna : To drink Tears of love Amanush...
thats good...very good.. unhone hamaare naam-e-bewafaai pe kuch sher bhi likh diye... humko to majbooriya batane ke liye do alphaaz bhi na mile.. bade shaukh se sah liyaa humne bewafaa kehanaa unkaa.. kyuke wafaa nibha sake unse, hum ko aise haalat bhi na mile..
Hey Vishwa i doubt if Amanush did put that in his title..someone else might have done that.. and Amanush... u know what i'm gonna say... but anwys its a Fantabulous Poem..its deep and got a lot of hidden meanings in it its always good to read ur poems Take care God Bless....
had a lil trouble understanding ur hindi spellings, coz u've made the spelling more complicated for example: dour, jeisse, Ousska etc,. which r actually simple hindi words! but keeping this trivial thing aside..i think ur poem was very nice and as usual ur the undisputed badshah(king) of blues reps fr u!
@ Nimisha...! Jawaab main jo ashaar aap ne likhe hein...we laajawaab hein !Younhi aate rahiyega... @ Vishwa...! Thanks for appreciating all the poems...! Weisse, Vishwa Bhai ! Takhallus main kya rakha hai... ? Hamara naam Danny hai ! Issi naam se aap hamein poukaara kijiye...ok ? @ Martina...! It's so very nice of you to appreciate the poems written by me...!Do keep encouraging like this and May God bless you... @ Vini...! Your comments have brought many rays of happiness in my heart...! : Thanks so much... @ #iR@...! Thank you very much...! Take care all of you...! Amanush...
