Mera itnaa burd-baar hona bahout houa Shabdon ka intishaar hona bahout houa Qulzum e ishk bhi kahin soukh na jaaye Chashm se aabshaar hona bahout houa Kouch jo wo kehti to baat kouch aur hoti Mahawl ka nagaawaar hona bahout houa Aab e aatish main doubne ab mein chalaa Jaam e gam ka iqtidaar hona bahout houa Naqaab e shayar pehne sabhi ko behlaaya Ab mera aissa riyaakaar hona bahout houa Mehfil se leni ijaazat chahiye bhi ' Mushkil ' Yahan pe tera khaardaar hona bahout houa Burd-baar - Patient intishaar -Spreading Qulzum e ishk -Sea of love Aabshaar - Waterfall Nagaawaar - Unbearable Aab e aatish -Wine Iqtidaar - Influence (asar) Riyaakaar - Pretender Khaardaar - Troublesome Amanush...
@ amanush... CHA GAYE HAIN AAP! FANTASTIC! great work! but yaar... i am gonna miss ur poems... hope u keep ur promise!
very nice poem!!... im impressed as usual!! but hey...i dont think uL like to reply..but i'd ask anyway..have u decided to stop writing poems or stop posting them at igt?? and if yes..why? let me tell u that ur one of the best poets of igt anyways ur poems will be missed by all! tk care ps-whats with the point donation?
vah kyaa nazm likhi hai har jumla khud main ek gazal sabhi Ko jaana hai, main peeche aaya tu aage chall ye baat exprience nai sheekhayi, hai important most palt ke dekhna mat varna, mushkil hogi ruksad dost..... irada badal jaaye to jaroor post karna...still waiting
Sad to hear its your last poem its fine if its the last one you've posted but i doubt after reading the poem Anwys Wish you good luck and good health god bless take care! n Keep Smiling ----> hope u stick around to comment on the other poems
