me and her

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Feb 6, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

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    Title:- me and her

    Its another grey evening, i need some thing hard
    Those juices in me, have taken their start
    i ran 6 rounds and then went to Jim
    Weight's increase weigh, dont dissolve any thing

    hah,i dont wanna fight, no not another row
    but this thirst needs its lush, i know it will go

    So this macho-inside-cute faced-animal
    cooming back home, he looks soo lull

    just before my room, i can smell something famine
    oh my beauty on the couch, with that aristocratic mine...

    pick her whole body, nothing else i should disturb
    slowly rug my rough chin, on her perfect curve
    pinch her ear lobe, babe will tke u high
    she takes her time, to adjust on my thigh
    palm below neck, figures dug in her belly
    vigour and sweated, air all smelly
    A.. Am....Dm.....Csus...
    catch up the rythm, push for a push
    wave over a wave, as its nothing i miss
    its the end so rotate her, on her neck put my lips

    some hymns still in the air
    as again i throw her their....

    all u dirty people re-read to think too far
    its was me and her, my jumbo guitar

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  2. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    great one. jus as you said...hilarious indeed.
    but i didnt mean that you have to stop posting your great efforts here.
    i hurted.
    i jus said that i need meanings so as to understand the poem well...so that i'll improve my hindi(urdu) vocab also. :)
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i dont know hindi...urdu...yaaar...and resistant to any commentsmy persona lacks DURR..fear..anything like that cant help :(....so no need to feel soory..aish kar...;)
    but....
    i write like kids na .....
    cant help, theek se english bhi nahi aati
    but sooch agar guitar ki jagaha ladki hoti to
    life ban jaati


    take care
     
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    that chota sa boy in your avatar writes all this stuff aisa lagta hai
    lekin kyon i dont know why dil ke ik kone main woh humko bhata hai

    Sweet poem
    made me smile..

    you have a way with words
    bhelpuri type sometimes
    but jus like bhel its khatta-meetha:)
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

     
  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Nah..i dont see that happening again:)
     
  7. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    Funny (unintetionally though).

    As its a tradition to leave a small paragraph of "poetry" every time anybody replies, i'll post one although its less cheesy:

    Fires burning,
    huge structures collapsing,
    Good evening
    Good evening.
     
  8. shsnawada

    shsnawada Cyborgs & Pasta

    SHAK......


    Why dont you "comment" on this thread????
     
  9. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    @shswanada....I cant understand u.....leave it

    @bubbly...so app ke liye ek sher

    vo puche kuch-kuch apne bheech bhi hai
    tum chup rahna kuch mat kehna...
    app NA HAI NA HAI kai bar kaho,
    to vo sun le ga HAI NA HAI NA.....

    u shoud stop replying to me;)...varna phir se ho ja-ye ga....:-D
     

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