maybe..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, May 11, 2012.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    maybe the world's walking too fast..
    or maybe i am walking too slow
    maybe i am just juggling my present and past
    or maybe i am just feeling a lil' low..

    maybe i am just left behind..
    or maybe i want it to be so
    maybe i am out of my mind
    or maybe i am jus a lil low..

    maybe no one cares any more
    maybe they're jus following the flow
    maybe the whole world's a whore
    or maybe i am jus feeling low..

    maybe i jus want to run far away
    or maybe im confused..i dun know
    maybe i am waiting for rainy days
    or maybe i am jus low..
     
  2. Simply Aweeee-some !!

    left behind ...no one cares ... run away ... may be im just lil low ... wow (so damm true when one take a dip )

    very neatly expressed ...if i would have written it i would have added a couple of more deeper thoughts... ur attempt was really a truthful one !!
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    thanks a lot :)
    umm .. i too could have added more..but then i think poetry shall not be an exaggeration..maybe...i dunno..
     
  4. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    maybe it ain't the worldly strife
    and maybe it's neither you
    maybe it's just the normal pace of life
    maybe there's no reason to feel blue...

    maybe you don't have to catch up with the rest
    maybe monotonousity was never your virtue
    maybe insanity always brought out the best
    maybe there's no reason to feel blue...

    maybe caring will make you weak
    maybe that's the reason you're not in the queue
    maybe you just need to retain your mystique
    maybe there's no reason to feel blue...

    maybe you just need to standstill
    maybe you should just enjoy your brew
    maybe you perfectly fits the bill
    maybe there's no reason to feel blue...
     
  5. very well wriitten rikky ...

    its like a new perspective the brighter side ... i never knew u are soo good with words

    keep posting
     
  6. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Thank you very much monica... :]
     
  7. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    dude..
    3 words..
    you are awesome!
     
  8. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Thanks nandy... :]
     
  9. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    May be you are living under an illusion of how things are "supposed" to be ...
     
  10. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member



    everybody does that.
     
  11. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Not everyone ...
     
  12. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    everynoe does..at some point or the other. .
     
  13. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Yup when you are child.
    Yes.
    Because you are under influence of "adults". And even if you are not, you are "forced" to "fall in line" with their views.
    But if you are an adult, and living this way, only you stand to be blamed.
     
  14. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member


    there..you proved my point..
    i said..some point or the other..i never mentioned childhood or adulthood or whatever..
     
  15. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Hmmm, yes, but referring to your post about "everyone does at some point of the other" - surely childhood was not in your mind.
    Otherwise you would've pointed that out.

    In fact, I had to help your argument by mentioning about the childhood!
     
  16. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    you are just trying to sail the boat to your side.. forcefully.. :\
     
  17. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    I trying to sail YOUR boat, so that it can put up some fight !

    :p:

    Although, I haven't really derailed the thread - forum nazis may want me to quit ... or post about the poem lyrics and measures and rhythm and emotions.

    (Though I am sure I did comment about the "emotion" part)
     
  18. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    you cannot sail MY boat..!! >_<
    its mine..and how could you possibly know what was i thinking at that time ? you are no mind reader..
     
  19. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    You don't need to be a mind reader if there is nothing in the other's mind :)
     
  20. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    that was a bad one.
     

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