Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, Jan 21, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    life is tale of woes,
    each day brings new sadness,
    happiness turns into agony.
    insecurity and more to come...

    today again
    i have to live my day..
    to see all...
    to face all...
    to cry once again..

    when i am going to die?
    i cannot see the light at the end of life's tunnel...

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  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    the poet here is confused...
    poet says he wanna die coz of sadness.. but he also agree that hapiness is existing..which is just turning into agony..
    so.. does it mean... life should be full of happiness only.. n when sadness comes, one shud die????
    poetry lacks rhyming grossly.. i can call it freestyle.. but its too short to clearify its meaning..

    (sorry.. i dont know style of english poetries.. but that's wat i felt.. reading this)
  3. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    Well written Rohit and expressed it in few words too...
    No Nimisha the poet is trying to show you how each day of life is and the cycle of it is...He doesnt want to die but doesnt know where and how his life will end as there is no change in his ongoing day to day life so is looking for a new light in his life which he cant see...

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