Making of a song

All you talented artists out there - help me write lyrics plzz... i suck at it big time.

Let me start - hope you can add good lines.

Humour is welcome but please stick to ONE LINE per person.

will chose and pick out the best - will post the song within one week.


Thanks,
sam

here goes -

"THE MOUNTAIN IN THE DISTANCE CASTS ITS SHADOW...

 

"the Shadow Casts Its Shadow On Me Standing Below "

 

Continued

'In the Distance i hear the scream..."

 

^You do know that lyrics have to be based on one train of thought right? This simply will not work.

 

..um letsee..

can we start all over?

..."swept pass the kleidoscope skies"

 

This is not lyrics writing.This is how to make a song suck.

If you want to write lyrics atleast tell the topic.You need to be clear about the topic to go on.
If you suck at writing lyrics first write some poems and then move on to writing songs.

 

its easy to make a rough tune at first and then make up lyrics ...

i think of em on the spot, they aren't great but it works ..

 

i think post an idea ...a story sort of thing...waht do u wanna express
that will decide the genere ...then move for the lyrics ......