Maine socha nahi kabhi

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by sweetie, Feb 10, 2006.

  1. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    Kash Ho Aisa Jab Bhi Mujhko Chahat Ho Teri
    Dil Mange Tera Saath Aur Mujhko Ijajat Ho Teri

    Yaad Karta Hai Dil Phir Bhi Kabhi Chaha Nahi
    Din Nikalta Rahe, Har Din Mujhe Jarurat Ho Teri

    Maine Chaha Hai Bas Itna Hi, Apni Kismat Se
    Ki Jab Tak Jiyun Main, Dil Main Mahobat Ho Teri

    Rooh Mit.ti Nahi Par, Janti Hun Sharir Nasvan Hai
    Jahan Lu Aakhri Saansein Vahin Aahat Ho Teri......
  2. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful !!
    I can really relate to the thoughts behind the poem.... aaah !!

    mar gaye ishq mein aashiq kitne , aashiq baniyo na
    ishq kabhi kariyo na. ishq kabhi kariyo na
  3. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    shukriya ji :nw:
  4. slash_i_m

    slash_i_m Laid to Rest

    gr8.very do u guys rite all this stufff?
  5. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    beautifully expressed............

  6. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    good one sweetie...
  7. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    thanks..likhte hai dil se :nw:

    rohit:beautifully expressed............Thank you my dear :nw:

    amit82cse good one sweetie: thanks for appreciating dear :nw:
  8. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    @sweetie...just wondering whether you can write poem on following given situation...

    "Sometime back you had spent great time with your love and now (s)he is far far away. You miss him/her but want to thanks him/her for those lovely moments which have helped you realize true meaning of life."

    Give it a shot, it will help you improving your skills and realizing your true potential in poem writing.

    Mood is what i feel the single most important thing in writting and for this situation music from movie "Black -> The Bridesmaid" (check out may help you.

    All the best!
  9. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    Thank you very much Amit :nw: for giving me a situation and i will try to write on it..
    You are right mood is what you need in writing a poem and you wont believe but the music of black is my fav..thanks once again.. :nw:
  10. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    music of black ??/
  11. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    havent you listened to the music..??
  12. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    beautifully done.. great work sweetie... just as ur nick
  13. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    Thanks Rizaaj for appreciating :nw:
  14. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    Nah dear ... u talkinga bout the movie ?
  15. sweetie

    sweetie New Member

    Nah talking bout the music but ..The Movie is awesome you should
    watch it if you havent yet..
    Yes the music too of black is beautiful..

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