maan-ja Title: mushkil hai **************************************************************** paas bhi ana mushkil hai aur door bhi jaana mushkil hai ye simple simple se teen lavz sab ko samjhana mushkil hai !! jis shaher main sab concrete ka hoo, arid and banjar sehra sab uss mein gulab ke phooloon sang, vaqut bitana mushkil hai !! tu maange kuch, main na keh doon, aisa to ho hi nahi sakta lekin dujoon ke kehne se tera maan bhi jaana mushkil hai !! paas bhi ana mushkil hai, aur door bhi jaana mushkil hai ye simple simple se teen lavz, sab ko samjhana mushkil hai !! *****************************************************************
wah yaar!!!wah!!!! salla....mein hoon jo ladkiyoon ko patana chahta hoon and here is you......uve got the damn chance but still tu pata nahin raha..... anyways.....funny poem......i liked it a lot!!!!:beer: "main avara badal na havaoon ka pata na saala barasne ki khaahish no stop but never gave it a thought, where i'll be going......" the best lines in the poem!!! uj:rock: ps- u wrote that chooti chidia baadi udaan.....man....i loved that poem.....i suggest that u start a new thread in the poetry and lyrics section and write it......
uj_.................. man some things r very sweet but u dont want to eat them.....masoom si candy puuch rahi ho jaise will u eat me Cryptic :------- main aisa hi hoon....all crapy..hahaha all:- reply in waht ever manner u can.....fools write poetry ......we create them every day.....its all like going to a very beautifull place and be busy with your camera...aur kisi bhi artistic mannerism ko jyada sar pe nahi chadhana chahiyee....take a smooch and push away ...:-D
Madhuresh.... the feeling behind the poem.. is good!! I have known someone myself ... who had the same feelings and went on to shoo the girl away.
see man shortly i will leave the forum and if some 1 goes through my work us bechare ko kuch to milna chaahiyee in my replys Raazz rakhne ka, apna maza hai ya to hum ko pata hai ya ussko ko pata hai !! this is a goood thought lets chase this one......
